Have you ever felt
like there was something you could do that could make people happy? Have you
ever felt that you were talented with something and wanted to share it with the
world? Poetry is a writing form that is used to make people happy and share
important concepts with the world. Many people don’t pay attention to and value
the benefits of poetry. After learning about this extraordinary form of writing
that lies underneath the shell of everyday stereotypes, anyone can cherish the
wonderful experiences that come with writing and reading poetry.
Poetry is a
writing form that allows you to express yourself using feelings, thoughts, and
emotions. Poems are pieces of writing that are like little windows into the
mind of the poet. Unlike prose writing, poetry does not need proper
punctuation, grammar, or spelling to be astonishing. In poetry, it's really the
thought that counts. To illustrate this, the poem How Billy Collins Writes A
Poem by Marjory Wentworth says, “When you first wake up, notice/ how your
mother’s voice, calling/ you to breakfast, sounds like a fire alarm.” This can
bring back memories, emotions, and expresses childhood, your most content days.
There are so many poems talking about nature or the world around us. Poetry is important because, through it, you will learn to appreciate the world around you. Even poetry about a broken-down shed can make you realize and appreciate things if you think hard enough. For instance, lines from Exultation by Lidy Wilks say, “My petals/ flourished/ day by day,/ growing/ ever larger/ and vibrant,/” In this poem, she describes life from the point of view of a tulip. You can have a great appreciation for just a simple topic. Secondly, poetry is important because it offers a great way to connect with other people. For example, an excerpt from Kid Stuff by Brian A. Bendall says, “Chocolate candy cigarettes/And big bubble gum cigars./Mini Bricks and Red Ball Jets,/Hopscotch and Dinky cars. This poem talks about childhood and all the happy days and memories. This particular segment talks about popular candies at that time. It has a topic lots of people can relate to, which means that it helps them connect with each other better. To show this, if one person reads a poem about school, they could share it on social media, and many people around the world could comment and like that poem. This is just one way poetry helps people connect, and there are lots of different ways.
Finally, the last
reason why poetry is important is that it helps a person mentally. This could
mean that poetry makes people happy, sad, or mad. Poetry could help you cope
with stress in your life, and it could bring back memories of loved ones.
Poetry can make your everyday life a little more peaceful. To show this, lines
from Jazz Jive Jam say, “On Saturday, my mama sang/ a song that sounded
blue./ Then daddy made his trumpet cry--/I guess the rent is due. ‘Round
Midnight came a band of neighbors/
swinging soul to soul.” This is an example of a poem that has an emotional
effect on your brain. Singing, dancing, and playing an instrument are all ways
to express yourself. Writing poetry can
be very therapeutic and de-stressing for some people. Not only does reading
poetry help a person, but so does writing.
To sum this up,
poetry is a very diverse and expressive writing form. It connects people with
each other, helps you appreciate things, and helps people mentally in various
different ways. Right now, poetry is
not as valued and respected as it should be. Given the fact that this writing
form is very helpful to many individuals, numerous people still tend to lean
away from trying this out, thinking that poems are odd, or that it’s a waste of
time. Now, with some key principles of poetry under their belt, people should disregard these false assumptions
and consider putting a small amount of
time in their day to really see the eye-opening experience poetry is.
-Nethra
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