Are you ever
losing by a lot, and when you are, do you ever give up? Giving up is the worst
thing you can do, whether it is something you are trying to learn, something
you are trying to overcome, or something you are trying to win. I was once losing in the most important
football game of my life, but I didn’t stop trying, and I learned the important
skill of perseverance.
Waiting in the
frigid air with an immense coat over my pads, I was numb. Disappointment filled
the air as the Guilderland team before us had lost their championship game.
Promenading around in what seemed like below zero weather, trying to keep warm,
I knew it was going to be cold, but not this cold. The butterflies in my
stomach felt more like pigeons because I was anxious of what would come from
this game. Eventually, we started to warm up as a team, which created even more
hesitancy because we would now be much closer to game time. We weighed in, and
then went into a small shed. Our coach gave a gavalizing speech, and we were all
ready and hyped up for the game.
The hype of our
team and all of our energy slowly went down as the game started, considering we
weren’t able to do anything on offense and they scored in less than four plays.
Most of the team had already given up. We started to become lazy and not care;
we all thought we were going to lose. Half time came, and you could feel the
bad energy. We could hear the disappointment in our coach’s words. We had to
pick up the pace. We still had another
half, and we weren’t going to give up.
Coming into the
second half the score was six to nothing...they were winning. But we now had the ball. We kept trying to
run inside but soon realized that was not working for us. It was too late to
switch it though because the other team got the ball from a fumble. They ran
the ball, getting many yards, and were now at our twenty-yard line. Anger
filled our veins; they were about to score again, but we stepped up and stopped
them, forcing them to punt.
Our coach called for a jet sweep to me. I was
ready to sprint as hard as I could. I got the ball and immediately saw that
there was a lot of open field for a good twenty yards. Sprinting as fast as I
could, I gained sixteen yards before getting hit; I drove my shoulder right
into him as more of his teammates came to help. I got an additional six yards
after the hit and was now hyped up. The next play was the same play, yet now to
the other side. I was lined up on the other side of the ball as the whole other
team and their coaches were screaming to watch for me getting the ball. Hearing
that gave me even more excitement. I could feel my heart pounding. I could tell
this would be a big run. The play started, and the cold rock-hard ball was put
into my frozen hands. I got past two people, then three, the crowd screaming.
But it was all a blur. The only thing my mind was set on was scoring, and
winning this game. I cut in, then back out, and was in the endzone.
“TOUCHDOWN TOMMY
DWYER!” a kid yelled over the speaker. The whole team came running to the endzone.
You could feel the excitement among us.
After that
touchdown, we were more alive, and we knew that we were back in the game and
could still win it. We got another touchdown, the score was now thirteen to
twelve, and we were winning. It was now the fourth quarter, and they just got
the ball back from us. If they scored here we would lose.
“We need a stop
here, boys!” our coach yelled. On the first play, they ran for twenty yards.
The pigeons flew right back into my stomach, yet they now felt not like
butterflies, or pigeons, but vultures. It was looking like we wouldn’t be able
to stop them. They kept running and running down the field. We finally got a
stop, and then another. Soon enough it was fourth down. This one play
determined the entire game. They gave the ball to a massive kid; he was
probably double my size and terrifying. He was running to my side and gaining
speed. He only needed five more yards to get the first down, but… I pushed him
out of bounds before he made it there. At that point we all knew we won the
game. The entire team came running to me, and they all jumped on top of me; it
felt like a truck was parked on me. Everyone was yelling and shouting, even our
coaches. You would have thought each of us won the lottery. The excitement slowly
died out as we went over to get the championship trophy. The whole team was
still talking about it weeks later.
When you are
losing, never give up. That day when I had that game, I learned an important skill. That skill is
perseverance. When I was losing in that game I didn’t quit; I tried even
harder. Trying harder ended up with us
winning. Always push yourself and never quit.
-Tommy
The lesson I have learned, is that even if you are undergoing a lot of pressure, or losing by a large margin in anything, there can always be light at the end of the tunnel that can turn things around. This can apply to my life, by proving to me that even if I am losing by a lot, I can still make a comeback, and the best way to do that is to be positive. One quota from the text is, "After that touchdown, we were more alive, and we knew that we were back in the game and could still win it." This shows that after you scored the touchdown, you knew there was still hope.
ReplyDeleteOne thing i learned from this story to never give up, “TOUCHDOWN TOMMY DWYER!” a kid yelled over the speaker. The whole team came running to the endzone. You could feel the excitement among us." and i could relate to this because I know one TD could change the whole mood of the game.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned from this story is how to keep perseverance going during harder times. For example,"The pigeons flew right back into my stomach, yet they now felt not like butterflies, or pigeons, but vultures." He obviously is nervous but he still keeps focused and calm, then makes the game winning stop.
ReplyDeleteSomething I loved about this narrative is the figurative language brings this story to life. "The entire team came running to me, and they all jumped on top of me; it felt like a truck was parked on me." I love this line because everyone can guess what it feels like to have a truck on them and, then how it felt to have everyone piled up on you, and that was only one of the lines that pulled me into this narrative.
ReplyDeleteI learned in this storey to never quit. it says "Always push yourself and never quit." this is a good leasen everyone should know and do.
ReplyDeleteI liked how this story had a lot of action in it. I also liked how you started the story."Are you ever losing by a lot, and when you are, do you ever give up? Giving up is the worst thing you can do." I think this beginning is a positive beginning to the story.
ReplyDeleteI like how the whole time it left me on the edge of my seat waiting to know if you guys get a touchdown. I also like how it did not make me bored because it was an intense game and had a great opening and a great ending.
ReplyDeleteSomething I really liked in this narrative was the amount of detail, that really made me feel like I was actually on the Football field. You kept the reader engaged, and as kept reading, I wanted to read more of the story. Really good job.
ReplyDelete¨The butterflies in my stomach felt more like pigeons¨ I have never heard that before and I like it.
ReplyDelete"The butterflies in my stomach felt more like pigeons because I was anxious of what would come from this game." I like this quote because it tells me how you were feeling when you were starting the game. Which then I could compare to your mood later in the game.
ReplyDeletethe lesson I learned was that you need to overcome your fear. before the game he was nuvouse but by the middle of the game he said "After that touchdown, we were more alive," i like this quote because it shows that they finally got past their nerves and were ready to win
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