You’re running down the court, sweat running down your forehead. You hear the loud thunderous steps of the other players trailing right behind you. Out of the corner of your eye, you see the opposing team’s players running right by your side. You’re playing in a competitive game of basketball, and they’re ready to close in on you. Panic flows through your veins as you step up to the hoop. You’re running out of time. The pressure of making the winning shot is tugging at your shoulders, causing you to overthink your every move. You count your steps carefully. One….two….three, shoot. Suddenly, you hear the ear piercing shriek of the whistle and the voice of the referee, “Travel!”
You could have won the game. But how do you win a basketball game? The answer is simple, whichever team scores more points wins. Points are scored by shooting a basketball and getting it in the hoop. Regular shots scored inside the 3-point line are worth two points. Shots beyond the 3-point line are worth three points. And free throw shots are worth one point. Each team is allowed a minimum of four players on the court.
Let’s talk about the rules of dribbling. A player dribbles the basketball when they would like to travel around the court without violating the rules. If a player does move both feet while carrying the ball in their hands, they get a travel violation. But where on the court can you dribble the ball? The answer is inbounds. A basketball court will usually have lines running the perimeter of the court. These are the boundary lines. Inside of these lines lies the court, where you can dribble freely. But outside of the lines is what people like to call Out of bounds, which is the area where it is illegal to dribble. Inside of the court is where you may do all of the passing, shooting, and dribbling you would like.
Sometimes, when you break a rule you will get a foul. Each team is given five fouls per quarter. There are many rule violations that can lead to a foul. But the major cause for a foul is illegal contact between players. Three common fouls in basketball are personal fouls, shooting fouls, and defensive fouls. A personal foul is the most common type of foul and is given to a player when they make illegal contact with another player that violates the rules. A shooting foul is given to a defensive player that makes illegal physical contact with the shooter while he is shooting the ball. And lastly, a defensive foul is a foul given to a defensive player who has made illegal physical contact with another player. Fouls are a very important part of basketball when it comes to keeping the players safe.
After learning about the many complex rules of basketball, you may be searching for a reason to play. Not only does basketball greatly improve your physical health, but it is also beneficial for your mental health. The rules of basketball are very important because they keep everybody safe and unharmed. But learning and submitting to the rules of basketball also teaches you responsibility, cooperation, and teamwork. As you begin to follow these rules, you are gaining responsibility for you and your team. You are also cooperating with the opposing team, the coaches, the referees, and your teammates. Working and cooperating with others will impact you greatly in the future and teach you the importance of teamwork. This is why learning and obeying the rules of basketball is important.
Basketball rules are complicated and will vary from team to team. But learning about each of them will help you in the game of basketball. If one team member forgets the rules, they’re letting their whole team down.
-Julia B.
I really like how in the introduction you immediately hooked me and it took my mindset like I was in an actual game and all the detail was amazing and very well done. Every time you start a new paragraph on a new part about basketball I wanna keep reading more! When you said, “Working and cooperating with others will impact you greatly in the future and teach you the importance of teamwork.” I felt like that was a really strong line that everyone reading should be paying attention to because it applies to not only sports but real life aswell. Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteI have never played basketball or got into basketball before so this Our writing piece helps me understand it better, I like how in the first paragraph you described an example of a game in basketball, I also liked some words you used “pressure” and “overthink” I never liked competitive sport but I personally think this is how a person would feel while playing a game of basketball you would feel pressured and overthink every move you make in order to win, “One….two….three, shoot. Suddenly, you hear the ear piercing shriek of the whistle and the voice of the referee, “Travel!” ” I feel like the worse thing that could happen while playing a competitive game is making a wrong move that could cost a win.
ReplyDeleteCooperation is a key theme in this piece. It really shows in the conclusion, when you say, “If one team member forgets the rules, they’re letting their whole team down.” Coordinating with others is a key part of basketball and other sports, so I liked how you weaved it into your piece. Your introduction had great detail. For example, when you say, “The pressure of making the winning shot is tugging at your shoulders,” it conveys the emotion that success is barely within reach; it’s akin to the real feeling, which made me want to dive further into your writing.
ReplyDeleteI like the intro. It has a lot of detail,” You’re running down the court, sweat running down your forehead. You hear the loud thunderous steps of the other players trailing right behind you. “ You should revoke,” Let’s talk about the rules of dribbling,” it is self explanatory and common knowledge. I like how you explain in a lot of detail.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed how you brought me right to the court in the beginning of your introduction. I can really envision the intensity of the game with the way you set the scene, through tons of amazing detail. I personally don't play basketball but the way you described the rules of the game are now very clear in my mind. I also really like the quote “If one team member forgets the rules, they’re letting their whole team down.” I totally agree with this line and think it applies to so much more than just basketball. Overall I really enjoyed reading this writing piece, it kept me interested even though I don't play basketball, Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good piece of writing. You really gave good description on the feelings and details at the intro. I also play basketball and also agree that it is important to learn the rules. I liked the way you described the rules and why it's important to learn the rules of basketball. You can see this from this text.“The rules of basketball are very important because they keep everybody safe and unharmed. But learning and submitting to the rules of basketball also teaches you responsibility, cooperation, and teamwork. As you begin to follow these rules, you are gaining responsibility for you and your team.” Overall, very good job and I enjoyed reading this as a basketball player and I agree. Good job.
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ReplyDeleteAs a 4 year basketball player, I have experienced losing close, intense games like the one you mentioned a couple times.
I also understand the central idea you installed in your writing piece, about how every sport has rules and if one person forgets, it can ruin everything.
I have also experienced that situation before as well. Somebody on my rec team when I was little didn’t remember the rules. To quote Julia's story, “If one team member forgets the rules, they’re letting their whole team down.”
This quote really showed me what the central Idea of the story really was.
I agree with you very much and support your central idea.
I think you did an amazing job.
The message that you're putting out is very informative because now I know more about the rules of basketball. For example, if I foul I know how to avoid it again.
ReplyDeleteI like how you hook the reader by putting them in a situation so they know how you or others feel when they're in a game. I like how you said and described this quote “sweat running down your forehead. You hear the loud thunderous steps of the other players trailing right behind you. Out of the corner of your eye, you see the opposing team’s players running right by your side.”