Your poem was very short,so it was a little hard to figure out the message and/ or topic of this poem. Although it was hard I think I have an idea about the topic. I think it could be betrayment. I think that in the poem the person that is crying all night long crying maybe because they have been betrayed so many times by the people and/ or things in your life.
I thought that this poem was really meaningful and truful. I believe the central idea for this poem is betrayal because the topic, which is crying, leads into the betraying, like in the last line of the poem, "Betraying ends you".
wow great job dude this is a m a z i n g.I am positive that your central idea is betrayal and your message is "being betrayed on is the worst feeling in the world" because of your last line of your haiku "Betraying ends you" Anyways great job bro.
Your poem was very short,so it was a little hard to figure out the message and/ or topic of this poem. Although it was hard I think I have an idea about the topic. I think it could be betrayment. I think that in the poem the person that is crying all night long crying maybe because they have been betrayed so many times by the people and/ or things in your life.
ReplyDeleteI thought that this poem was really meaningful and truful. I believe the central idea for this poem is betrayal because the topic, which is crying, leads into the betraying, like in the last line of the poem, "Betraying ends you".
ReplyDeletewow great job dude this is a m a z i n g.I am positive that your central idea is betrayal and your message is "being betrayed on is the worst feeling in the world" because of your last line of your haiku "Betraying ends you" Anyways great job bro.
ReplyDeleteYour did a great job. Your lines for established mood were great. Crying all night long meant sad.Betraying ends you means your end.
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