Tuesday, December 18, 2018


Why do people create art? Many do it for various reasons. For example, some people do it to earn money, and others do it for fun or as a hobby. I personally do it as a hobby. Sometimes I draw because I’m bored; other times I may be drawing because I’m upset. I draw when I’m bored simply because it’s fun. I draw when I’m upset because I found it easier to show than tell. I started drawing when I was in second grade. I typically drew animals and nature. I liked to draw flowers, cats, dogs and more. As I got older I focused more on my drawing, like making improvements, focusing on details, and making longer projects. In my art class, we did different art projects using oil pastels, watercolors, and acrylic paint.
We walked down the hall, our footsteps echoing against the walls. The teacher was leading us to the art room, and when we were there my classmates and I shuffled in, the teacher heading back to her class. We walked to our seats and sat down. After we sat in our seats our art teacher announced we were going to draw a close up of a lily. She called out each table to get a piece of white construction paper that was 16’’ by 12’’ and then go back to their seats.
After everyone was done, she told us to gather around the table she was sitting at. She was demonstrating how to draw the outline of the petals and the middle part of the flower with crayons, and when she was done, we went back to our seats to try it on our own. We could also choose any color we liked; I chose pink. After everyone was done, the teacher told us to color the background, and the color had to be a little darker than the petals. Before we knew it, class ended, and my classmates and I had to head to our next one.
We had art again two days later. As we got to class, I noticed cups of paint and water cans on the tables. She told us to gather around the table she was sitting at. She had a plastic film and her finished drawing of a lily. She told us to put the film on top of the drawing and paint on the film with the colors we chose. She was also demonstrating to us how to blend the paint to create darker or lighter shades of that color. After we were done, she said to paint the background, and when we finished, she put the wet painting on a drying rack. After we got to have free time and color whatever we liked.
A few weeks later my family and I received a letter that my project got second place in an art contest at a museum for young artists in the district. We went to the museum to see my art piece and the others. When we got to the section with my piece, I saw that the plastic film was stapled on the construction paper with the painted side down. I also saw that my friend got first place. Later at school I congratulated my friend on getting first place.
The reason I create art is because it’s fun, and I do it as a hobby, though others may do it for other reasons. When I get older I wish to improve on my skills and draw with a wider variation. I wish to improve not only my talent but also my creativity.




-Emily Zhong

12 comments:

  1. I draw everyday and it helps me focus and i love drawing hands that have been cut off

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  3. A message I found strongly broadcasted across your piece was, work hard for the things you love and good things will follow.

    I liked the way you wrote, ¨We walked down the hall, our footsteps echoing against the walls. ¨, as I felt as though I could truly hear the footsteps.

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  4. Great Job. I love how you show you love for writing, such as when you wrote,"Sometimes I draw because I’m bored; other times I may be drawing because I’m upset. I draw when I’m bored simply because it’s fun." It showed that no matter what mood you're in, you'll draw.

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  5. I agree that art can help relax; it also helps me relax. The message I see is that I can apply to my own life is hard work makes progress. Emily said, "I focused more on my drawing, like making improvements, focusing on details, and making longer projects." I can relate to this because in Tae Kwon Do, you need to work hard to improve your skills, and need to focus on the details. I think Emily did a great job!

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  6. I think your message is that art can be very enjoyable. ¨The reason I create art is because it’s fun, and I do it as a hobby, though others may do it for other reasons.¨ I can apply this to my life because I also love art, and is one of my hobbies. You did a great job with your description, and making your piece come to life!

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  7. Your piece was very good. It shows how much you love drawing, as an example, you said "Sometimes I draw because I’m bored; other times I may be drawing because I’m upset. I draw when I’m bored simply because it’s fun." This shows even though you might be upset, you can always count on drawing for cheering you up.

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  8. Your piece was very good. It shows how much you love drawing, as an example, you said "Sometimes I draw because I’m bored; other times I may be drawing because I’m upset. I draw when I’m bored simply because it’s fun." This shows even though you might be upset, you can always count on drawing for cheering you up.

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  9. a message i can personally take from this is that you should always do what makes you happy, for example you said "Sometimes I draw because I’m bored; other times I may be drawing because I’m upset. I draw when I’m bored simply because it’s fun. I draw when I’m upset because I found it easier to show than tell." you said you draw when you are upset, i draw when i am upset also, instead of keeping all that anger in i do something that takes my mind of it and i believe that is a great way to cope, your essay is inspiring, keep up the good work

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  10. I think the message of this story is dedication.The line that supports this is "As I got older I focused more on my drawing, like making improvements, focusing on details, and making longer projects." I liked how you explained that you got better and took more time doing it.

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  11. Drawing is really fun, it helps me relax and take my mind of things. Sometimes though it can be hard and frustrating when you can't get something right. I love how you show steps on how to get better at art."Why do people create art? Many do it for various reasons. For example, some people do it to earn money, and others do it for fun or as a hobby. " I liked how you started off with a question and then answered it, that technique made makes the reader keep reading.

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  12. I really like your atention to detail, I myself also draw as a hobby. "When I get older I wish to improve on my skills and draw with a wider variation. I wish to improve not only my talent but also my creativity." I think is a really nice way to end your story, it adds a distinctive note that we can all go off of.

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