Have you ever ran a 5k or a whole marathon? Are you in school
and recently ran the mile? There are millions of people who have. Running is
known by a lot of people, and it is done by a lot of people. But a lot of
people also don’t run for many reasons; some aren’t physically capable, some
are too busy, and some are just lazy. Running is the concept of moving but at a
fast pace. But more people should start running, including you.
Running has many benefits. It improves your overall health.
Studies have shown that running increases your good cholesterol, increases your
immune system, and decreases your chance of getting blood clots. If you are a
woman, running decreases your chances of getting breast cancer and strokes.
Over two dozen studies have shown that women who exercise have a thirty to
forty percent lower chance of getting breast cancer. If you have early-stage
diabetes, HPB, or osteoporosis, running is for you, and it decreases your
chance of getting heart attacks and heart diseases. A study conducted in 2013
states that higher levels of physical activity reduced the risk of coronary
heart disease by twenty-one percent in men and twenty-nine percent in women.
Running also helps lose weight and burn calories, and running is one of the
best ways to do that.
Running helps with memory. In a study done at the University
of British Columbia, researchers have found that repeated aerobic exercise
boosts the size of the hippocampus, which is the part of the brain that deals
with verbal memory. Also, old people should run (unless they aren’t able to)
because it slows your mental descent. Finally, the American Heart Association
says if you run 150 minutes a week it will help keep your blood pressure in the
good area.
Running helps with cardiovascular endurance. The more someone
runs the longer they can run, and the faster they can run. How that happens is
when you run more your heart can become stronger. So your heart can pump more
blood to your lungs, and you will get more blood and oxygen in your muscles, which
you need in order to run.
Running slows down your aging. It doesn’t slow down your
physical aging, but it does slow down your biological aging. Biological aging
refers to the telomeres that protect your chromosomes. But as you get older
those telomeres get shorter, which is aging. When you run, or exercise in
general, it lengthens the amount of time it takes for your telomeres to get
smaller, but if you want to slow the process down a lot you have to run a lot,
no pain no gain. Larry Tucker from Brigham Young University studied people who
run/exercise at least thirty to forty minutes a day five days a week and people
who don’t run/exercise that much. The people with high exercise had a nine-year
difference in biological age than people who don’t exercise that much.
Running has many benefits, physically like improving your
cardiovascular endurance and mentally like improving your memory. More people
have started running over the years. Some people run because it’s fun, some
people run for the benefits, some people run because they have to. But no
matter why you run you will still get the benefits it brings. It doesn’t matter
if you have barely run since school or if you are in school. Get out there and
just run.
-Sai
Settipalli
Throughout your piece, you talked about running and the benefits of it. You even started every paragraph by telling the reader how it is beneficial. So, I believe the message is that running is beneficial.
ReplyDeleteThere were many details and I can tell that you did your research on it. Great facts by the way!
"Some people run because it’s fun, some people run for the benefits, some people run because they have to."
Above is the quote that I chose, and it is my most favorable throughout your piece. You pretty much summed up the whole piece in that sentence, people run for different reasons, but you still get all the benefits that come with it.
After reading your piece, I now understand more about the benefits of running. In particular, I thought that ¨A study conducted in 2013 states that higher levels of physical activity reduced the risk of coronary heart disease by twenty-one percent in men and twenty-nine percent in women. ¨, was a great line as it didn't leave the reader with any questions, it was straight forward and to the point.
ReplyDeleteYou had a lot of specific details and had good punctuation and grammar. You had a lot of good evidence to support your statement. Running has many benefits. It improves your overall health. I chose this because it shows why people should run more.
ReplyDeleteI liked that you ended with the benefits of running. You also included lots of good grammar punctuation, and lots of good vocab words. Keep it up Sai.
ReplyDeleteI liked how throughout the entire piece you talked about the benefits of running. The main line that showed this was “It improves your overall health.” It has s also good that you give benefits but also why people run. Good job Sai.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed all the facts you presented in your essay, it really convinced me how good running can be. I also liked how you showed if we work hard we will receive many benefits. In the essay you said:"Running has many benefits. It improves your overall health. Studies have shown that running increases your good cholesterol, increases your immune system, and decreases your chance of getting blood clots." This really shows how hard work conquers all and can help in life too!
ReplyDeleteI like you're introduction when you just start out with "Have you ever ran a 5k or a whole marathon?" It kind of caught be off guard, but then I saw all the benefits and understood. I might start running more.
ReplyDeleteI like how you started your intro with questions to leave the reader thinking. I also like how your research convinces people to start running more because it has a lot of good effects on the humans body. You are also very good at describing why running is good and like a timeline about how good running is. You did a great job and you ended your conclusion with a statement.
ReplyDeleteI'm gonna start going to the ymca again instead of not going because the basketball courts are filled with little kids .They have a program for basketball which kind of ticks me off because i love the sport basketball and the one time I can go is on saturday 11 to 2:30pm. But now i'm gonna start going and start running on the track upstairs for like 2 hrs at least and when the program finishes i'll play basketball and make sure to include more running!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your piece. It was really persuading and had good detail. Your piece shows the benefits of running and it was really executed well. The quote "Running is the concept of moving but at a fast pace. But more people should start running, including you,'' really hooked me into your story and just made me keep reading. Also the facts that you put into your story was really good. I'm definitely going to make sure I run more.
ReplyDeleteI can infer that the message is to use what your good at, and enjoy it, I can apply this to my life by doing things that I may be good at more and having fun doing it. A quote I like is “Get out there and just run.” This shows how much you care about running and want all others to do it.
ReplyDelete"Have you ever ran a 5k or a whole marathon? Are you in school and recently ran the mile?" I really like how you started with a few questions to get the gears in our brains turning. Your piece is really good and I didn't know about all of the benefits of running. I think it was great that you wrote about a healthy activity and are trying to promote it. The message that I got from your essay was that exercising has many great benefits.
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ReplyDeleteThis piece is trying to convince people to start running and you used some great facts to convince people so I think that's great. One fact I really liked was "Studies have shown that running increases your good cholesterol, increases your immune system, and decreases your chance of getting blood clots." This was a fact that you backed up and built on later so I thought that was well done by you.
This story attempts to get more people to run. I could run more in my life to get healthier and faster during sports. A quote that proves running is good is "running increases your good cholesterol." That is saying running is good for you. I like how you wrote it because it is very convincing to get more people to run.
ReplyDeleteThis piece taught me not to take advantage of my good health. "Studies have shown that running increases your good cholesterol, increases your immune system, and decreases your chance of getting blood clots". I liked how he stated multiple benefits of running.
ReplyDeleteThis piece showed the motivation to run and be more active. This gave me a better understanding of running and tells me that all the basketball I play has more benefits than I thought.
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Running has many benefits, physically like improving your cardiovascular endurance and mentally like improving your memory. More people have started running over the years. Some people run because it’s fun, some people run for the benefits, some people run because they have to. But no matter why you run you will still get the benefits it brings. It doesn’t matter if you have barely run since school or if you are in school. Get out there and just run.
I like how this can possible motivate people to run for only the benefits and how deep you went into the research and information.
I think the message is that running is something you should try to do and like, because it can improve the way you live. I actually have tried running before and I didn't like it, but then I continued, and enjoyed it a lot. So I can apply this to my life because all of these facts give me a better understanding of what it does to your body, and really inspires me to run again.
ReplyDelete"Some people run because it’s fun, some people run for the benefits, some people run because they have to. But no matter why you run you will still get the benefits it brings. It doesn’t matter if you have barely run since school or if you are in school. Get out there and just run."
I like this quote because it shows me that no matter what spot you're in now, you still have a chance to start running.
I like this story because your are trying to convince people to run and I already do. But I also like it cause this quote "increases your immune system, and decreases your chance of getting blood clots." And it reminds me of a time in my life when I was sick and I went on a run and after my run I came home feeling so much better. Good Job Sai!!! - Danyal
ReplyDeleteI like your intro by saying” have you ever ran a 5K or a whole marathon”. I can realate because I have ran many of 5k’s and I know how it feels. I think the message is “ Running has many benefits, physically like improving your cardiovascular endurance and mentally like improving your memory. More people have started running over the years.”
ReplyDeleteThe message from this piece that I inferred is to be more healthy. When you said ¨Running has many benefits. ¨It improves your overall health.¨ I liked how it made me want to run, because I would be improving so many things that would make me more healthy. I can apply this to my life because I have ran 5ks before, and I know the way you were feeling when you were running it.
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