YOU, yes, you! Have
you ever found something so cool, so amazing, so, you? Something you like, no, LOVE, something you
can see in your mind all the time, something you just need? That’s how a collection starts.
A collection is something you take interest in, like, let’s
say seashells. You think they’re cool,
so you might have a shelf filled with different seashells. Maybe one’s from your Grandma’s home on the
beach. Maybe ones from your trip to the
beach. Whatever it is, or however much you like that special ‘thing’, that’s
what your collection is about. Mine,
however, is pigs.
Why would I collect pigs?
What’s so special about them?
Well, really, I don’t know. Whatsoever.
I started collecting pigs when I was really young. I collected them because I thought they were
interesting, but then it turned into more than just a few pigs. And as any typical collection, when people
notice it, they give you more of that something.
Usually on Christmas is when I would get more pig-related
things. But sometimes I’d get them from
vacation, some from traveling, and even some from my (close) friends’
trips. But that happens with any
collection. It turns from you collecting
that “thing” personally, to your close friends and family getting them for you
whenever they see it. When people see
something related to your collection, they think of you. For me, whenever my close friends see a pig
keychain, they’d get it for me and say, “Zach,
I thought of you when I saw this!” So then I thank them, maybe give them a hug,
and put on a happy smile. That might just be the fastest way to grow your
collection.
My collection has turned out to be very big. If you give yours a few years’ time it too
will grow big. In total I’ve collected
over 40 pig related items; most are gifts from others. The best thing about collections, or at least
in my opinion, is showing off the collection.
When it grows really big and grand, that’s when it gets
interesting. So when you have a lot of
that thing, you can show how many of
that thing you have, how many different ones; there’s really limitless
possibilities.
Why I chose pigs to collect is still a mystery to anyone,
even me. But, collecting special “somethings”
can be a big part in your life. Like how
I collect pigs is a big story to tell.
But a collection isn’t just about telling stories of how you started
collecting that special something, or what and where you’ve collected that
thing. It’s about what you think
of your collection.
-Zachary
Dumlao
I collect multiple things so that I can have something to be passionate about. The quote "And as any typical collection, when people notice it, they give you more of that something." inspired me to build of collection of anything whenever it be legos, figures, or just stuff in general.
ReplyDeleteI think your message is that having collections can be fun! ¨When it grows really big and grand, that’s when it gets interesting.¨ I can relate to this because I love collecting japanese/korean/chinese items, I find them so interesting and unique. You made your introduction really engaging, great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece! I can relate to building up something from the bottom, and then being satisfied with the results. For example, the quote, ¨My collection has turned out to be very big. If you give yours a few years’ time it too will grow big.¨, shows that anybody can make a sizeable collection of something that they are interested in. Great job Zachary!
ReplyDeleteAmazing writing! I love your introduction it really pops. I deduced from this that if your passionate about something, and you enjoy it you shouldn't care what others think or why you do it. As shown in this line "But a collection isn’t just about telling stories of how you started collecting that special something, or what and where you’ve collected that thing. It’s about what you think of your collection.". Just do your own thing. I can relate to this because I enjoy collecting souvenirs and pins.
ReplyDeletei love how you started your introduction off, it helps other to visualize how exciting it is to find a collection, take this pat for example "Have you ever found something so cool, so amazing, so, you?" that really got me thinking and helped me to want to read more and find out what is going on, what i can take from this piece is that you should do what makes you feel great
ReplyDeleteYou have a very interesting collection. I love how you engaged the reader from the very beginning with "YOU, yes, you! Have you ever found something so cool, so amazing, so, you?" and then you declare that the "so you" is "collecting pigs". For a minute, I thought you were actually collecting live pigs. Your piece really showed me the joy you get from your collection. It reminded me of a neighbor that enjoyed collecting early 20th century machines, including typewriter, bikes, engines, and even a small plane.
ReplyDeleteI can relate to you Zach. It's like you don't know know why you're doing something but you still do because you love doing it. For example, I keep my clothes in hangers. There's no benefit of it, but I still do it. "Why I chose pigs to collect is still a mystery to anyone, even me". I like how you indent the paragraphs very well.
ReplyDeleteI see you are very passionate about Pigs. I have passion for many things in my life so I can relate. You said "Something you like, No, LOVE." I like how that was written because I play Golf and I dont like it, I love it. Good job Zachary
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