When it’s near the end
of the school quarter, most 11 year olds would be rushing around to make sure
they have all of their work in. Well, trust me. That’s not what I was doing. Instead,
I was home with pneumonia, except I still had work to hand in and complete. But
that’s pretty hard to do considering it hurts to think, let alone move my body
to an upright position so I could even envision doing homework. I was was just
a mere sixth grader, and all of the doctors told my mom that it was just a
fever and it would go away soon. Fever or not, I was missing a bucket load of
school, and the end of the quarter was coming up. Unlike most kids, I was
actually wishing to go to school.
I was at gymnastics
when I started getting really queasy and nauseous. I was working on my vault
routine when I knew that if I went upside one more time I wouldn’t be able to
keep it in, so I went up to my coach. All of my stomach pain and sweat came out
through my tears while I told my coach how sweaty my palms were and how dizzy I
felt. I then ran out to the bathroom stall and leaned over the toilet
vigorously. Now, if you’re a smart person then you would be able to infer what
would happen next. But for those of you who are clueless, I’m sorry to inform
you that I have no intention to tell you what happened in that next minute.
Trust me; you aren’t missing out on much.
My other coach came in to check on me, and she ended up calling my
parents. All of this happened on a Monday, and I was suppose to stay after
school that Tuesday to get some work done. Well, I can assure you that I wasn’t
in school that Tuesday. Or the next one. I had my mom email my teachers to tell
them about my unpredictable dilemma, and they sent all off the work I missed to
my friend, Abbie, who came over to deliver it.
On Tuesday night I
planned to go to school on Thursday so I could stay after to make up the work I
was supposed to make up Tuesday. My fever had other plans, so I ended up staying
home with yet another monotonous day ahead of me. I’m full of energy and I love
going outside, so when I was stuck on the couch all day I was pretty bored. At
this point my mom decided to contact the doctors, who seemed to think that it
was only a diminutive stomach bug, except they couldn’t see a glimpse of how
pale and fragile looking I was through the phone that my mom was talking into.
My sister had an irritated eye one of the days that I was home, so we went to
the doctors so they could check up on my sister. I was in no condition to stay
home alone, considering I would throw up if I stood up because it took so much
effort, so I went along with my mom and my sister, Carly.
Once we got there they
checked on my sister, who was prescribed eye drops. The doctors took one look
at me and demanded to check to see what was wrong. They felt my chest and knew
something was up. I was sent over to the ER where we waited five interminable
hours just to have a doctor come talk to us. They hooked me up with some
medications and told me I had pneumonia. I also was told that I couldn’t go
back to school for at least another week. I then asked about gymnastics because
I had an upcoming meet. They told me I should really stay away from sports for
now, considering my lungs weren’t in the best condition.
As I watched the days
tick by, I thought of the homework piling up. I couldn’t even imagine how much
I had missed, and I started worrying. If I had kept those zeros in my classes
my averages would have stumbled down a big hill. This was a really hard time
for me. When I see something that isn’t right I take action immediately; ask
anyone. I hate being helpless, but that’s what I felt like as I was watching
all of the work pile up on my desk. I couldn’t even work on the assignments I
had because it hurt my head to work on anything that had to do with reading.
Plus, I hadn’t even learned the new stuff I was suppose to be practicing.
Finally, my pneumonia
went away, and I got to go back to school, but my battle was only halfway
through. You would be surprised at the different reactions of my teachers. Some
teachers threw work at me and told me it was due next class. Other teachers let
me skip unit tests! But the amount of sincere teachers was not enough. Every
day I came home from school, and I would hurl the pile of work on my desk,
watching as the days before the quarter ended grew shorter and shorter. I was
unbearably stressed out. I was getting quiz after worksheet after assignment
tossed at me, all expected to be turned in the next day. It’s not that I wasn’t
doing the work, it’s that I had missed all of the new material that I needed to
know to be able to comprehend the worksheets!
I spent all of my free
time doing the work, Facetiming friends to help me do it, asking my teachers
for help, and occasionally asking my parents.
For that one week, I barely talked to anyone about something other than
academics. My social life perished, and in return I was handed a golden platter
of schoolwork. Every kids dream! The last day of the quarter came, and
surprisingly I had finished up all of the work I owed. Once I had turned in the
last bit of assignments that were due for that quarter, I was so relieved! A
burden had been lifted off of me and I could finally have some free time. For once that whole week, I could sit down
and watch TV, or go out and walk my dog. Getting two weeks worth of school done
in one week was extremely hard, but I pushed through.
There were plenty of
times when I wanted to stop doing the school work (technically I couldn’t have
because I would have fallen even more behind), but there were definitely times
when I wanted to go hang out with my friends, or go play a game. I had to
prioritize, and I knew that school work came first. Even when I wanted to give
up and go do something else, I knew I couldn’t. I persevered and kept going,
even when times became tough. I knew that if I stopped then I would never get
to where I wanted to be, and I wanted to be finished with my school work. I
went through the bad times, leaving me with really good averages.
If you feel like
quitting, then think about this: difficult roads often lead to beautiful
destinations. If you want to arrive at a beautiful destination, then you better
get on that difficult road. It may be rocky, but it’s the destination that
counts.
-Chelsea King
ReplyDeleteLet me just say, I can 100% relate to this. I've had pneumonia twice now, and just like you greatly described it in your piece, it is a horrible experience to go through. When I read this, I felt the stress build up inside of me too, and I really hope everything turned out well for you. This piece made me feel really anxious, but at the same time hopeful. I had pneumonia once in 2nd grade. It was so bad I had to stay at the hospital for 5 days, but I had unlimited TV time. I also had it this year in 8th grade. It wasn't as serious. It was called walking pneumonia and I also caught it early, so I only skipped 3 days of school. Not as bad as what you went through, but I did have work that I needed to catch up on so I can sort of relate to the line, "Instead, I was home with pneumonia, except I still had work to hand in and complete." Though I can't deny that the 3 days off of school were awesome, aside from the sudden chest pains I'd get once in a while. This was an awesome piece and very descriptive, and I really hope you're better and that the quarter ended well.
This piece was amazing, and it really showed the struggles you went through and how you persevered through. I especially liked how you engaged the reader with your intro, "When it’s near the end of the school quarter, most 11 year olds would be rushing around to make sure they have all of their work in". Generalizing the audience and making me interested in the rest of the piece, along with putting me in your shoes a little while doing it. I also really like your mature vocabulary use. Thank you for sharing your experience, and helping people who read it to remember to persevere. This is a great piece.
ReplyDeleteThe lesson I learned is that you should be lucky you get to go to school, because there are others who can't. I can apply this to my life because it makes me even more privileged to be in school and learn.
ReplyDeleteThis is an outstanding wrting piece. Even though I never suffered through this before, I could truly understand how hard that experience must have been for you due to your use of detail and engaging voice. Those two techniques made me very intrigued in this writing piece. They also made me realize that I take even going to school for granted and I should be more grateful for that privilege.
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