Jay shivered as he
smelled the putrid smell of puke on the bottom of the US Higgins landing craft
headed for Normandy, France. He felt lightheaded as the boat shook violently in
the choppy tide.
“Jay, you don’t look so
good,” said his longtime friend, Andrew.
“Why the hell am I here?”
Jay said.
“No clue. You're the one
that enlisted,” Andrew remarked. Suddenly, a loudspeaker rang out through the
Higgins boat.
“Attention soldiers! We
are two miles offshore from where the largest seaborne invasion ever known to
man-kind is taking place. I wish you all the best of luck, and I want you to
remember what you are fighting for today. Adolf Hitler has been terrorizing the
world, and our efforts today will be a big deal in stopping him. Now go kill
some Germans!”
When the door of the
landing craft dropped, it looked like a scene from hell. The water looked burgundy from all of the
blood. Screams of terror and agony rang out through the crisp, cold air. A
split second after the door was dropped, the first couple rows of soldiers in
the landing craft immediately dropped to the floor at an overwhelming swarm of
enemy fire.
Jay had difficulty
getting off the boat fast enough as he stumbled across the layers of corpses on
the bottom of the boat. Bullets from the Nazi’s 55 millimeter heavy machine gun
were whizzing inches past his body in every direction. He could see the massive
machine gun mounted in the Nazi fortress that loomed over the beach.
Jay sprinted for cover as
he spotted a nearby German “Hedgehog.” Hedgehogs were placed on the beach by
the Germans so that if the Allies landed at high tide, the sharp edges on the
twisted metal structure would puncture a hole in the boat's hull, making it
sink. Jay crouched behind the twisted hedgehog and caught his breath. The
constant BOOM of mortars rained down on the beaches, blowing bodies up into the
sky. He looked at the beach, but it was all dark green, and there was not much
sand. As Jay took a closer look, he realized that horrifying truth; those green
lumps were bodies, thousands and thousands of dead bodies. Jay saw a
mortar headed straight toward the Hedgehog he was behind, and he immediately
started sprinting for his life. He spotted a barbed wire fence and sprinted as
fast as he could to try to get away from the mortar’s explosion. He dove toward
the fence just as the cloud of flames erupted right where he was sitting just
seconds ago.
A thought popped into Jay’s
head as he regained his balance. What happened to Andrew? His longtime
friend, whom he had known for most of his life, was most likely dead, just like
thousands of other men on this beach. He wanted to cry. Just cry for hours for
all of the things he had already seen on this beach. Cry for all of the
innocent soldiers that never deserved to die. Cry for Andrew. He wondered in
his head, why am I here? What made me want to fight in a battle I
knew I was going to most likely die in? What is my fate going to be on
this beach?”
Jay saw some other
soldiers on the other side of the fence. He crouched behind the sharp barbed
wire fence and made his way over to the group of huddled soldiers.
“We’re all gonna die! We
can’t make it off the beach without getting mowed down by a line of fire from
that big gun!” remarked a tall, scruffy looking soldier.
“Now don’t blow a fuse
about this! If we stay calm, we might have a chance,” said a shorter soldier.
“By the looks of it, that
big gun is aimed right at us, and if we even try to push forward, it’s gonna
obliterate us all. We have to somehow use something as cover if we wanna make
it outta here,” Jay said.
“That’s it! We can use
one of the blown up Sherman tanks as cover!” said the tall scruffy soldier.
“Okay men, let's move!”
Jay acknowledged.
All three men ran towards
the smoldering American Sherman tank and crouched behind the large, sharp tank
tread.
“Okay men, there's a
nearby sand dune that’ll get us up and off this beach. There's only one
problem. No other men have been able to get that far yet. If we get up and off
the beach, we might be able to take out some of the German defenses so more
troops can get off the beach,” proposed the tall scruffy soldier.
“Sounds like a pla-- GET
DOWN!!” Jay screamed. A mortar was headed straight towards the Sherman Tank.
Jay and another soldier got away just in time before the mortar obliterated the
smoldering Sherman Tank. Jay looked at the body of the scruffy looking soldier,
laying on the ground. Dead. Jay looked at the dog tags of the tall, scruffy
soldier. “M. Kavanaugh” was imprinted on the silver dog tags. Jay was just
speaking to Kavauagh a few seconds ago. Now, the lifeless stare of Kavanaugh’s
corpse was looking into Jay's eyes. Things can change very quickly in a war,
Jay thought. One minute you're alive and well, and the next minute you're
dead.
“C’mon, we have to make
it to that fort,” said the shorter soldier. Jay took one last glance back at
the body of M. Kavanaugh and then started running toward the terrifying, gray
Nazi fort looming over the beach.
As Jay was running, he
suddenly felt lightheaded. This might be the last few minutes of my life,
Jay thought. There's a chance I will never see my family and my friends ever
again. Why did I enlist just to die? Why do I put my life on the line for
people I don’t even know?
Jay snapped out of his
trance when another mortar came inches from blasting Jay into the sky. “Damn
Germans,” Jay mumbled. All of the men rushed toward the Nazi fortress. Jay saw
a Nazi soldier guarding the fort. Without thinking, as if the command was
programmed into his brain from the countless hours of military training, he
raised his rifle, and BAM. The soldier fell right to the ground with splatters
of blood on his head. Jay didn’t even have the time to think about what just
happened.
Jay and the other
soldiers rushed inside the German fortification like a swarm of angry wasps
spreading out in every room. Jay and two other soldiers rushed inside a German
pillbox containing a mortar. Another soldier shot the German who was operating
the mortar before he even had a chance to turn around. Jay looked out of the
tiny, concrete window that was built into the German bunker. As he stared down
at the beach, it was a scene from hell.
Jay stared in shock at
what he was seeing. Bodies littered the ground, covering the whole beach in a
dark green, bloody red mess. Landing crafts were upside down in the bloody
water, and smoldering Sherman Tanks were scattered on the bloody red beach. Jay
would have this image forever embedded in his mind. The terrors that he
witnessed were unbearable, but he had to move on. He was extremely lucky to
even be able to walk, let alone be able to fight. Thousands of other soldiers
couldn’t even make it to this point; they died before they had a chance to even
fight.
“You alright, man?” said
a voice out of nowhere.
“Wait, that can’t be
possible. Andrew?” Jay observed as he felt the warm hand on his shoulder.
“Hey, man. Yeah, it’s me.
Took ya’ a while to realize that,” Andrew said with a smile.
“I'm so glad you and I
are still alive! I thought you were dead for sure after the mortar exploded
right outside the boat!” Jay remarked, a smile beaming from ear to ear.
“It's not over yet. We’ve
still got the whole country of France to take back from these stupid Krauts,”
Andrew said.
The Germans tried to
defend their fort for several hours, but eventually the Allies took the fort.
“The fort has been
cleared out. We survived this part, but we have a long road ahead of us. We
need to start moving to Berlin now,” said the Sergeant from the sand dune.
“Yes, sir,” Jay and
Andrew said.
As Jay and Andrew stepped
out onto the streets of Normandy, France, the people on the streets erupted
with joy like a fiery volcano! They all were smiling from ear to ear, knowing
that the Nazis would finally be pushed out of this part of France. As Jay was walking
with his fellow soldiers, he saw a French mother and her child with tears in
their eyes. He finally realized he wasn’t fighting this war for him. He wasn’t
fighting this war to prove something. He was fighting for the people. All of
the lost souls who lost their family and friends to the devastating Nazi Reich.
He was fighting for his country, just as his ancestors fought for America’s
freedom.
A tear rolled down his
cheek, but he just wiped it away and smiled. Smiled that D-Day was finally
over.
-Jai M.
In Jai M’s story, there are a lot of historical things relating to WW2. The parts where they discussed the Nazis and the Germans point to WW2. It also shows a lot of the real feelings and descriptions of what a war would have been like to be in.
ReplyDeleteThe parts where it says “It looked like a scene from hell.” “Screams of terror and agony rang out through the crisp, cold air” are both good quotes that could help bring a description of a war to life.
The part where it says “Sounds like a pla-- GET DOWN!!” Jay screamed. A mortar was headed straight towards the Sherman Tank.” is a good way to show how hectic it actually is in a war too.
Dear Jai.M, I admire how you finished the story with a heartfelt message. I know that one of the central ideas that the author wrote is that it’s important to look at the whole picture and not just a self-centered part. The final line in the story is what tipped me off. It says, “As Jay was walking with his fellow soldiers, he saw a French mother and her child with tears in their eyes. He finally realized he wasn’t fighting this war for him. He wasn’t fighting this war to prove something. He was fighting for the people.” In my opinion, the author is trying to say that you can do great things to help others. No matter how big or small, anything can help.
ReplyDeleteGood job with the story! I liked the adjectives that you added, like “whizzing,” “embedded,” and “looming.” It helped me to see the story in my mind better. There was also 2 parts of the story that I really liked. One was, “This might be the last few minutes of my life, Jay thought. There’s a chance that I will never see my family and my friends again. Why did I enlist just to die? Why do I put my life on the line for people I don’t even know?” I like how he is thinking over about his decisions. And the second part that I liked, at the very end, is, “He finally realized he wasn’t fighting this war for him. He wasn’t fighting this war to prove something. He was fighting for the people. All of the lost souls who lost their family and friends to the devastating Nazi Reich.” Jay had confusion on why he wanted to fight, and at the end, he realized that he was fighting for the lives of everyone else. I liked the figurative language where it said, “As Jay and Andrew stepped out into the streets of Normandy, France, the people on the streets erupted with joy like a fiery volcano!” A central idea that I took from this is purpose, because Jay didn’t know his purpose in fighting at first. He thought he was fighting to save himself. But really, his purpose in fighting was to save other people. He wasn’t doing it for himself.
ReplyDeleteThis story was amazing Jai! I think the central idea is family, when Jay was talking to those soldiers and saw one of them die right before his eyes it felt like he had lost part of his family. He barely knew the person but still felt a connection to him regardless. Also, when he saw the French mother and son, he knew he was fighting for them. He had never spoken to them in his life but he was willing to put his life on the line for them.
ReplyDeleteThis historical fiction piece showed the history of D-day perfectly. Describing how horrible the day was with lots of facts and describing the character’s feelings about Nazis. I was familiar with the allusions Adolf Hitler, Germans, and Nazis. In the first sentence, it says the allusion “the US Higgins landing craft” making me have to look it up. Allusions at the beginning help set up the story. This piece really shows the history behind D-day in the correct way.
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