I woke up with a start.
My alarm screeched as I groggily reached over and struggled to turn it off.
When I finally found the button, I lay down for a few minutes before I started
my day. It was Tuesday. No events planned at the office. I sighed heavily and
rose with effort. As I wearily made my way to the bathroom, I prepared myself
for a long, typical day.
As my morning continued
on, my Nokia kept ringing with messages. The debate between answering them and
leaving them continued on in my head, but eventually I decided it could wait
for a while. I still have a long life left to answer them.
My morning consisted of
my usual shower, a light breakfast, and change of clothes. Finally, I left my
house, and the time came to decide on my method of transportation, car or bus.
I stood and thought and decided that I was too tired to drive. As I drowsily
walked over to the bus stop, I couldn’t help but feel something in the pit of
my stomach, a feeling of danger, of fear. It was 7:00 in the morning; nobody
would try to hurt me.
The bus arrived, and I
found a seat; that feeling of unease remained. For an unexplainable reason, I
just couldn’t shake it. I thought about calling friends but decided against it.
The morning continued on, and more and more people boarded the bus. About 30
minutes later, the bus pulled to a stop, and many people, including myself, got
off. I read the map at the bus stop, with the big “You are here” sign pointing
at Lower Manhattan. I stopped by at my normal coffee shop and exchanged a couple
of dollar bills for a cold coffee. After a short walk, I came close to my
building, but first marveled at the best sight in New York, taller than the
Empire State and a huge tourist attraction. The buildings that signified the
glory of New York: The Twin Towers.
The next 30 minutes went
by with a blur, walking into my building and onto my office floor. The floor
felt familiar in what seemed like a foreign morning: the receptionist desk to
my left as I walked in and office desks all throughout the rest of the room. To
the left, the entrance to the conference room remained open. A short walk
later, I was sitting at the desk reserved for myself, and I began to type on
the computer that sat in front of me.
Thirty minutes of
constant typing had passed when I heard a voice to my left. “Is anyone else
getting the feeling that there’s something major about to happen?” I identified
the voice as a friend and colleague, Chris.
“Yeah, thought it was
just me,” I answered curiously.
“Not just you two either.
I’m also getting this abnormally weird feeling,” said Jennifer, or Jen, as we
all called her.
Voices overlapped one
another across the room, mostly consisting of people saying how they didn’t
feel anything out of the normal.
“Well, Cody, you, me, and
Jen seem like the only people who feel it,” Chris said to me.
“Seems like it.” So it
wasn’t me going crazy, though I was a bit frightened now that I knew it wasn’t
me.
The next ten to fifteen
minutes continued as normal. Quiet conversations here and there, Chris cracking
a couple of jokes from time to time. Though they sometimes made me laugh, they
were usually terrible. I was just about to tell him to shut it when a loud,
thunderous boom echoed through the whole building. Everybody looked around as
coffee mugs fell, tables shook. People tripped and some fell, myself included.
The ground seemed alive as it shook and rumbled.
Decades passed, and the
terror finally ended. Everybody rose cautiously. My hands were out in front of
me for balance. After a short recovery, people began to relax a bit. Shoulders
that were raised high in fear slumped back down. People exhaled in large, tense
breaths.
Chris finally spoke up. “What
in the world was that?!”
“If I knew, I’d be
telling you,” I answered back. “Something buttery.”
“Everybody stay calm
while I call for help.” The receptionist, Skylar, frantically pushed a few
buttons on a phone none of us could see due to the wall that concealed it. She
put the phone to her ear, and everybody waited in dead silence for anything,
waited for somebody to walk in, somebody to answer the phone, waited for
another odd shaking.
“I’m on hold,” Skylar
informed us. She made a motion of pushing a button, and calm music began
playing from a small speaker in her direction. I didn’t think the music was working.
The room looked as if a
terrorist had walked in, knocked over everything he could, and ran out. Tables
were tipped on their sides like they were taking a nap. Clocks and pictures
that rested on these tables were on the ground, mostly shattered. I ran to the
conference room window to get any clue about what happened. I was shocked by
what I saw.
“Guys, come see this!” I
shouted to the entire office.
Chris and Jen came
running in faster than a racecar at full speed.
“What is it?” Chris
asked.
“Take a look.” They both
gazed out the window at the horror I had just seen. The North Tower had been
hit. Fire and smoke poured out like water from a faucet.
“What are those…” Jen’s
voice trailed off in horror as she witnessed something she thought she’d never
have to see. People, real people, jumped from the 80 story tower, meeting their
demise at the ground.
“What are those people
thinking?” Chris asked in shock. I couldn’t blame him for wondering that.
“At that point, you don’t
have much of a choice. Burn in the tower, and die from falling. Take your pick,”
Jen responded half sarcastically.
I looked towards the
South Tower, and the plane that was advancing towards it. It didn’t take a
rocket scientist to figure out that when that tower got hit, the debris would
hit this building.
Chris gazed with terror
when he realized what was about to happen. “Oh--”
And the plane hit the
tower at what seemed like hundreds of miles per hour. A trembling explosion
happened that was similar to the previous one. Only this time, we were more
prepared.
I grabbed Chris and Jen
by their arms as I dragged them towards the other side of the room, the
building shaking us and all the fallen furniture. As I took the next step out
of the conference room, a huge chunk of the South Tower came crashing down on
the roof and took that part of the building with it.
Everybody glanced at us
worriedly as we ran across the room, wanting the terror to end. When we got to
the other side of the room, we gazed over at what was previously the conference
room, now a giant hole. Fire had also begun to take its place.
Chris pulled himself free
of my grasp and nodded his head thanks. Jen grabbed the nearest wall and sighed
heavily, catching her breath. Chris and I turned towards the room and faced
everyone in it. Their faces looked as if they’d seen a ghost. I didn’t blame
them for not talking, but some chatter would’ve calmed my nerves.
“Alright, the call is
still going through, just a little longer,” Skylar informed us.
“No thanks, I choose
life.” Chris started towards the exit of the building. “I’m assuming you guys
do too.”
“So, how do you
plan on getting out, Chris? The stairs aren’t an option considering a piece of
building fell on it,” I reminded him.
He was about to respond
but realized he couldn’t say much and backed off.
As if on cue, the
building announcements came on. “Attention, the fire department is on its way
to evacuate all staff and non-staff members. Please remain patient as they make
their way here. Thank you for your cooperation.”
Nobody spoke much for the
next five minutes. I watched the fire as it gradually began to spread.
Everybody had moved to the far end of the room. All of us were thinking the
same thing; would tomorrow be a reality?
“Finally, help has
arrived!” Chris shouted to us all. As tired as I was, I rose up as fast as I
could and ran towards the fiery hole in the building. Sure enough, four fire engines and five police cars raced
through the commotion filled streets, sirens blaring loud enough for everyone
to hear.
From a police car, a
loudspeaker amplified an officer's words, “This is the NYPD. Please wait as the
fire marshalls evacuate you from the building.” On cue, three fire engines rose
their ladders up to the different floors and began the evacuation. The fourth
fire truck sprayed water in the direction that the ladders were going.
As the ladders ascended,
the announcement continued. “As soon as you reach the ground, run across the
Brooklyn Bridge towards Brooklyn. There, you will find buses to take you home.
Please note: all flights have been banned from takeoff and have been forced to
land.”
That was all I wanted to
hear. He announced more and more instructions, but I knew what to do. Run. Run
and don’t look back.
When I got down, I took
one last look at the building I used to work in, knowing that it may never be
the same again. Then I turned around and ran. Everybody was separated from each
other. Right now, people’s only intention was to make it home alive. I turned
in the direction of the bridge and broke into a run.
A
couple of minutes passed, and I had to stop. My heart was beating faster than
it ever had before. My legs ached, my side was sore, and my body was shaking.
The memory of the explosion flashed before my eyes, reminding me of its
existence. I couldn’t ponder on what had happened. Instead, I had to live to
tell the tale. I looked up at the sky, and it was an unnatural color. Smoke
endlessly poured out of the former Twin Towers, polluting New York City. After
a minute of rest, I took off again, making like a rocket towards the bridge.
When the bridge finally
came into sight, I stopped and exhaled in relief. I watched what seemed like
hundreds of people run across the bridge, showing me the thing I must do. The
city was now full of smoke and smelled like burned corpses. I made an
assumption that that smell came from all of those people who jumped off that
building. All those people who had abandoned hope and decided to take that jump
rather than to try and survive for their families.
I couldn’t go down this
line of thought. I took a deep breath of determination, locked my eyes on the
bridge, and began to run. When I got on the bridge, people screamed all around
me in fear of all the events that had taken place. The sound began to fade out,
leaving me with my thoughts, which mostly consisted of hoping that I would make
it home alive.
My side began to hurt. I
couldn't keep up with my breaths. I needed to stop, but there was neither time
nor space; the bridge was a giant clump of hundreds of people. Instead, I
occupied myself with even more thoughts. What should I have for dinner
tonight? If I make it till then.
Thinking didn’t seem to
be helping right now.
Then,
as if on cue, something else caught my attention. A plane that was flying
towards the bridge. I didn’t think too much about it, but my mind reminded me
of something; all flights were banned. Panic seized control of me. I was in the
middle of the bridge. There was no way to get to the end of it. I realized
there was only one way. I urgently ran to the side of the bridge and put my
feet on the edge. I grabbed the railing for support and got ready to jump. The
water that was at the bottom would keep me from dying from the fall. I was
determined to survive.
Suddenly, the plane’s
loudspeaker came to life. “This is the U.S; we are here to help. I repeat, this
is the U.S., and we are here to help.”
A sense of relief and
safety washed over me like a tidal wave and seaweed. Around me, people began to
vocalize that feeling. Cheers of triumph and happiness surrounded me. I may
have even smiled, but I couldn’t tell over the sound, my thoughts running wild
throughout my brain.
I
walked the rest of the way to the other side of the bridge, knowing that a U.S.
plane was right above my head, keeping me safe. The walk seemed to last
forever, but finally, I made it to Brooklyn. Multiple buses were parked there,
some already leaving. I boarded my designated bus to take me home.
On the
bus, all I wanted to do was sleep, but my thoughts kept me from doing that.
Most of my thoughts consisted of the fact that I could’ve died. Now that it was
all over, I wasn’t sure what to do. I looked out the window at New York City,
now covered with orange smoke, infested with the smell of corpses and fire. I
felt empty. My Nokia, still somehow in my pocket, came to my mind. I pulled it
out, unlocked it, and answered all of my messages I didn’t answer before.
-Paarth S.
I like how you connected the Nokia messages from beginning to end. “I still have a long life left to answer them.” This line has an irony after the main character experienced once in a lifetime of almost near-death experience.
ReplyDeleteI really liked near the beginning of the story when it said, “ The ground seemed alive as it shook and rumbled,” and I also liked how at the beginning there was a lot of sensory language. Some words are groggily, typical, and abnormally. I also like this line, “Chris and Jen came running in faster than a racecar at full speed,” and this is good because it compares them to race cars and how fast they go.
ReplyDeletePaarth your story is amazing. You make it seem like I am the main character. The way that used metaphors and similes to bring the story alive. “Fire and smoke poured out like water from a faucet.” they just bring the setting to life. “The room looked as if a terrorist had walked in, knocked over everything he could, and ran out”
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of bringing this story to life! I liked how you used the characters decision to take the bus to help us understand how tired they were. The little details made me feel like I was in the story. For example, your figurative language in the sentence, Fire and smoke poured out like water from a faucet.” really made me feel like I was looking out the window at the burning building. I also liked the sentence, “The room looked as if a terrorist had walked in, knocked over everything he could, and ran out. Tables were tipped on their sides like they were taking a nap. Clocks and pictures that rested on these tables were on the ground, mostly shattered.” this gave me a good picture of what the room looked like. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHas good use of quotations in it (“Yeah, thought it was just me,” I answered curiously.”). And good use of punctuation. I cant really relate to the experience. I dont know what the lesson is. I dont really think its good but has some potential.
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