It was long past dusk
when a blistering gale of wind shattered through the suburbs of Pennsylvania.
Many residents were long asleep when the wind blew down homes, buildings, and
even the most resilient street lights (the ones that had bursting trash cans
surrounding them, anyway). Almost no one survived except Carlos, who was struggling
to survive in the singed Pennsylvanian air.
“Can anyone help me?!”
gulped Carlos. He had been playing with his little brother, Arman, when the wind thrusted him -
and most of the water in the pool - airborne. It had been a peaceful night
originally with sedge warblers singing their tunes to the outcast of the
moon-lit Delaware State Forest. Carlos had been wondering about the park’s
misnomer since he believed it was in Pennsylvania. Nonetheless, Carlos had
nothing else to think after the wind blew past. “Hello?! HELP ME!!!!!” Having
beige-colored skin clearly wasn’t a benefit as the bright flash subsided while
trash and litter plowed over his body.
“You okay?” asked
Nevaeh, who was definitely not a person who could lift Carlos up. “I think it
was just a dream, Carlos. Nothing’s happening yet.” Nevaeh was clearly worn out
from helping innumerable amounts of survivors in the basement of some
underground basement in Pittsburgh. “Do you want any food or water?”
“How long have we been
here?” asked Carlos.
“About a few minutes. I’ll
go get you some water,” replied Nevaeh. Carlos pondered the events leading up
to the wind-rush. Mind rushing, Carlos stood up and promptly banged his head
against the dull-green slant protruding from the mainly persimmon-colored tube-like
structure. As like the town before the bang, unsanitary litter and liquids were
strewn all across the center aisle as he came tumbling down. Shaking off his
headache, he stumbled around until he collapsed at the foot of some sort of
red, squeaky door. “Hello?”
“Yes? Carlos!”
responded a delightful voice, which turned out to be Xavier, who was definitely
not also in ripped rags of clothing from head to toe. He had been Carlos’s
friend for the past 15 years, but they were mainly split since Xavier ran some
secretive agency in the Federal Government. “Are you okay?”
“Yeah; I’m just shaken,”
was all Carlos could muster before he fell back into unconsciousness, mind
empty.
***
“GET OUT OF HERE!!” was
blared all over the crackly announcement system throughout the truck-sized tube
of gloom and doom. As if the event was planned, the lights shattered into
shards of broken glass.
“Carlos! We have to get
out of here!” exclaimed Xavier. “I guess I’ll carry you out.”
Carlos had been dreaming of hot-red race cars
tearing up the cleaned roads of Philly like a hurricane blowing down a
well-nested tree when the roof of the tube suddenly came crashing down to smash
shut their only chance at exiting: that wooden red door. “We’re doomed,
aren’t we?” All of a sudden, the tube jerked up, tumbled, then smashed into the
ground like a meteorite making its mark on the surface. The whole tube crumpled
and split open into the inhospitable atmosphere. Although the air was made
safer by nanotechnology, the machines weren’t a creature to praise. “It could’ve been worse, right?”
“Definitely,” replied
Carlos. Carlos, traumatized by the tube’s tumbling, scanned the murky red
horizon. “There’s a group of escapers there!” They soon
galloped over the destroyed, gray ruins of the wrecked city. Broken windows and
crushed bed frames were strewn all across the landscape, along with the common
fast food box and plastic bag. The others wandered on through the same burning
disaster site as Carlos and Xavier caught up, hands waving. “Hey!”
“Don’t follow us,” was
all the group said in unison before they drew out some sort of advanced weapon.
The weapon glistened with purple flares of energy and light as it drew closer
towards Carlos and Xavier. “We’ve always been more powerful.”
“What did we do to you?”
asked Xavier. Being the brave one was clearly not the best quality in the
mid-war apocalypse as the weapons pointed straight towards him.
“Nothing… except
wasting 40 seconds of our time. Our creator marched us here, and now, we have
nothing left except these things.” The group raised their weapons and pointed
them towards the sky. Soon enough, they wandered off waving their black flags.
“What are they talking
about? At the Atlantic Ocean, there’s nothing more than salt water!” cried
Xavier. After all, Pennsylvania’s coast still had salt water compared to other
states of the crumbling Unified States. “What creator?”
“I’m not sure. They’re
so confusing,” said Carlos. “Recently, the News Department has been inundated
with numerous questions about the health and stability of the world after The
Bulletin changed the clock to one second. Politics and other news is just too
chaotic to follow, isn’t it?”
“Yeah. It really is.”
Suddenly, a purple laser blast skimmed past Xavier’s forehead to crash into a
building with a spectacular explosion.
“What was that?!”
yelled Carlos.
“Hey… stay away from
the coast. That’s where we live,” shouted back the mob. Carlos became uneasy
about the onslaught of threats and odd behavior from those creatures.
“What’s happening at
the coast?” asked Xavier.
“I’m not sure, but I’ve
heard that S.P.A.C.E. Corporation is building some sort of mega-ship to leave
Earth. They might be going there, but I believe that there’s room for at most
two more people,” explained Carlos. Looking around, he saw huge plumes of
natural gas sputtering out of broken valves and pipelines. “We have to go south
around five miles. We’ve got to beat them!”
“We will rule!” The mob had grown to
an enormous size, and the members of the group also seemed to be untouched by
the force that destroyed the city. “Leave this garbage mess behind! Bring back
Waste Corp!” they chanted into the distance. As they chanted this, a train was
barreling around them towards some sort of station. Both Carlos’ and Xavier’s
eyes were poised as it decelerated to a stop.
“Line 8A heading toward
final stop: SPACE Central Research & Development Center; departing station
in 30 seconds,” played the damaged speaker. The train appeared intact, but
there was no safe way to find out without hopping on board.
“Get on it!!” declared
Xavier. “It’s our only shot at getting there before them!!” Hands sweating,
they sprinted over smashed cars and radiation-ladened bricks towards the
glowing vehicle.
“Departing in 10
seconds… closing doors now. Stand clear of the closing doors,” said the train.
Just as the door was about to seal shut, Xavier and Carlos slipped through the
shrinking gap between the doors into the cabin. The cabin appeared to be badly
damaged by fire, but it was totally nothing to worry about. “Departing now. We
are expecting to arrive in one minute. Here’s an announcement from the
operator: ‘We… can’t… no!!! [static]’.” The static seemed to continue for what
felt like hours. “Thank you for using the Philadelphia State Rail System.” At
this point, the research center appeared to be almost blown down by the
immense, scorching winds. However, a massive ship loomed on the horizon. “Line
8A recalled to repair station. Disembark immediately,” warned the announcement
system. The doors opened into a red sky with lavender-colored clouds fuming
into the air. Fleeing from the crumbling train, Carlos and Xavier ran up what
seemed like a million flights of stairs to be greeted by a hailstorm of purple
streaks of light flashing past them.
“You will never escape
or beat us!! Get them off there!” ordered what seemed to be the leader of the
fanatical group. After the order, blinding flashes engulfed every part of the
vehicle. Before Carlos and Xavier were struck by the powerful laser streaks,
they saw a gaping hole before they could reach the main door of the ship.
“We got to jump!”
recommended Carlos. “It’s our only shot!”
“Ready? One… two…
three!” pronounced Xavier as they both leapt in unison. As they slid into the
ship, Xavier was struck by one of the streaks. “Carlos, can you take care of my
family? They’re at the moon base.”
“I’ll do my best,”
muttered Carlos. Afterward, Xavier lost his grip on the side of the ship and
plummeted 400 feet to the base of the launch complex. Carlos located a
flashing-red switch similar to those found in the basement of buildings to
control electricity. Unlike those, this switch had an ominous message in an odd
font: Break glass and pull down to escape.
“Here we go…,” Carlos
spoke to himself as he took the plunger attached to the base of the enclosement
and smashed it into the glass, which broke into millions of pieces as it
shattered. Carlos then pulled down on the switch; it suddenly clicked into
place as if a phantom had done most of the work.
“SPACE Experimental Ark
Vehicle One… evacuation protocol started… autopilot enabled… departing in ten
seconds,” declared the computer in the ship. Soon enough, Carlos limped into a
seat in the middle of a circular control room. The interior was unusually
sterile with a massive display panel hanging up on the roof of the dome-shaped
roof. The desks also lacked any trace of switches, gauges and anything that
could have obstructed or confused their users. Only a touch-sensitive screen
remained, which was covered in text in the font Carlos loathed: Comic Sans. All
of a sudden, the ship lurched upward. As it went up, he observed the fireball
engulfing the mob he fought the ship for. Soon enough, the immense forces
squeezing Carlos down into the seat knocked him unconscious.
“Max-Q observed… Main
Engine Cutoff… Stage Separation… Secondary Engine Start,” woke Carlos up from
his three-minute slumber. Although he was awake, he was struggling to maintain
his consciousness. “Translunar orbit insertion starting…,” pronounced the
computer.
“Ahh!”
screamed Carlos, who didn’t have the biggest problems like trying to find the
food stores, which the ship totally had. Carlos glided through the
now-weightless cabin, hands drawn. Carlos,
“How could this happen
to me?!” cried Carlos.
“I’ll explain,” said
the ship’s computer.
“What…?” asked a
bewildered Carlos.
“SPACE’s Darwin
Satellite System detected a set of alien craft landing into the planet’s
atmosphere. However, an electromagnetic pulse destroyed our remaining
satellites, but large radiation plumes were detected at the poles,” staggered
the ship’s computer. Carlos began to wonder how SPACE managed to build a
computer with such a simple voice and odd quirks with trillions of dollars in
government funding. “I do have a plan, though.”
“Huh?” Carlos was
startled by the sudden sound.
“SPACE had a plan for
humanity, but it meant for many more people. Without more, the human species
can’t be saved,” spoke the computer. Carlos’ stomach sank deeper into himself. “However,
before the end, we found a habitable world only a few hours away.”
“Really? If so, then we
should go!” exclaimed Carlos. Buckling up, Carlos sat down into one of the
pristine foam seats and stared upwards. The ship lurched forward with
tremendous speed, and as the starlight warped into a blur, Carlos fell into a
slumber.
***
“Are we there yet?”
stuttered Carlos.
“We have arrived.” The
computer then projected a set of flowers and fireworks onto the magnificent
screen. Just as the ship gracefully touched down into the lush forest, Carlos opened
the door into a world of wonder. Filled with red songbirds fluttering past tall
emerald trees, Carlos marveled in the pristine environment.
“It’s much cooler here!
I’ve never felt air this cool outside!” Carlos, clearly impressed with the
preserved world, leapt over many rocks to find many little organisms that
fluttered away with his glance.
“It’s only 70°F and
Earth was only 120°F,” spat out the computer. Carlos danced upon the flowering
plants beside him. “You should get some water. We’ll both need it to survive.”
“Both? I thought that I
only needed water!” argued Carlos. Carlos was conflicted on where to find
suitable quantities of water. “Oh well. I will be back.” Carlos galloped over
several mounds of stone and soil before he reached a glistening stream. He
scooped up water into the same, old plastic bags from Earth and hurriedly ran
back. Gliding into the spacecraft, Carlos opened the panel labeled “Computer
Processor - DO NOT OPEN.”
“It’s the end of the
line for you,” uttered Carlos as he forcefully slammed his fist into the
blinking, warm core of the computer. The intricate silicon circuit boards
disintegrated into tiny shards of solace as they plunked the base. Liquid
hydrogen from within the computer quickly volatilized into gas as the constant
whirs of the ship came to a halt, lights flickering.
“My work’s done here,”
muttered Carlos as he closed the door for the last time. As he galloped
throughout the forest for food, it was no longer important to return to the
ship.
-Michael Wong
Wonderful work Michael! The descriptive language throughout the story really gives me a good sense of the settings and what's going on, and strong verbs that you used also brought much to the piece. For example, words like, 'volatilized,' and, 'engulfing.' A line that also stood out to me was, "Hands sweating, they sprinted over smashed cars and radiation-ladened bricks towards the glowing vehicle." It paints a vivid picture in my mind, and the absolute does a good job of helping me to get more into the story.
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing piece Michael! I can totally sense the main idea of climate change. The line, "The Bulletin changed the clock to one second." This is an awesome way to show the idea of our possible effect on the earth. I can totally realise and apply to my own life the idea of using less technology and pollution creating objects.
ReplyDeleteI love the descriptive language you used especially the one in the opening sentence. "long past dusk when a blistering gale of wind shattered through the suburbs of Pennsylvania."
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