Imagine if you, the
reader, were standing in front of a scale; you were in the fifth grade and
weighed 155 pounds, and your dietitian said that you needed to lose some
weight, FAST. What would you think?
Well, what I thought was that I would always be like that, that I would never
be able to change, and that I would be stuck out of shape for the rest of my
life. But that isn’t what happened, and here is how that all changed.
Back in the the fourth
grade, I started stress eating because I was really struggling with the work
back in the day. While I was obese back then, and caused a lot of problems both
physically and mentally, I was completely paranoid and self-conscious. It didn’t affect my actions outside of school
until one year later when my mom started becoming concerned about my weight.
She said how I was getting 13 minute miles at school, and how I got out of
breath just from going up the stairs, so she took me to a dietician.
The results weren’t too
great. After the doctor got her results,
she told me the immensely harsh truth. I was five foot two inches and 155
pounds. Tell me, how would you react in that situation? Would you be
frightened, or scared for you life? I sure was, and it lead me to all of these
gremlins in my head. And with that truth, the
dieting started to come into play. Salads, workout camps, running, all
of it. However, in spite of their
valiant attempts to get me fit, none of it worked. And my parents seemed to
give up...
But around the same
time something that everyone hates started to come into play, running. My
mother, without my consent, signed me up for modified cross country in seventh
grade. When I heard this I flipped out. Aside from my older sister, my entire
family was a running family (still are today), but at the time I wasn’t a
runner of any sort! I was part of a running team for fun, but I always
came in the bottom three.
I thought that this
would be a nightmare! And at first, yeah it was, it felt like torture. My legs
felt like garbage after each practice, I always felt bad about myself, being in
last, and it felt like a one and one half hour practice was five and one half
hours! I wanted to stop as soon as humanly possible. But I soon started to
notice something…
After the first meet
that I had drastically improved my running speed by about three minutes in only
about two weeks! Not only that, I enjoyed the peaceful blowing of the winds
when running, and just being outside was a pleasure. And things only got better
from there; my mile time changed from a ten-minute, to a seven-minute mile! I
felt like I was on the top of the world! I still run today, and I've improved
all my times by one minute (in mile time).
So I have come a long
way with my weight, but what I’m trying to help you understand is to never give
up. Take my story for an example. I was 155 pounds and five foot two inches,
but with hard work, I lost over forty pounds and gained six inches, and I’m not
in my most fit state yet. Just because something is hard, like losing weight,
or writing an essay, doesn’t mean that it is impossible. As long as you put your mind to it, and
work hard, you can succeed, I know it.
-Robert Cusato
First i would like to thank you for sharing your story, it must have been very hard to talk about. Most people are not all too confident in themselves to talk about their weight loss journey,I think many people can take something from this essay,for example this sentence you wrote " Just because something is hard, like losing weight, or writing an essay, doesn’t mean that it is impossible. " this can help so many people to be more confident in something they would like to do, this makes me want to pursue a career in the arts and take my art more seriously, so thank you once again for sharing this amazing story with the public!
ReplyDeleteI am amazed by your story. I think its amazing how you lost weight and found something you love! But I can also relate to you and this quote especially. "After the first meet that I had drastically improved my running speed by about three minutes in only about two weeks! Not only that, I enjoyed the peaceful blowing of the winds when running, and just being outside was a pleasure. And things only got better from there; my mile time changed from a ten-minute, to a seven-minute mile! I felt like I was on the top of the world! I still run today, and I've improved all my times by one minute (in mile time)." This quote reminds me of the time when I was very slow like a ten minute mile time. Then I joined Track and my mile time went from 10 minutes to 7 minutes in 2 weeks. It is truly amazing.
ReplyDeleteI am impressed with your story, I really am. The way you wrote out your experience is quite impressive to me. Especially the quote: "Just because something is hard, like losing weight, or writing an essay, doesn’t mean that it is impossible. As long as you put your mind to it, and work hard, you can succeed, I know it." This quote from the narrative is very relatable because I always have troubles writing paragraphs/essays or answering questions the "right" way. But I always put my effort into it, and I always succeed.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story and your message of never giving up and always persevering even when the going gets tough. For example the quote: " thought that this would be a nightmare! And at first, yeah it was, it felt like torture. My legs felt like garbage after each practice, I always felt bad about myself, being in last, and it felt like a one and one half hour practice was five and one half hours! I wanted to stop as soon as humanly possible. But I soon started to notice something…
ReplyDeleteAfter the first meet that I had drastically improved my running speed by about three minutes in only about two weeks! Not only that, I enjoyed the peaceful blowing of the winds when running, and just being outside was a pleasure. And things only got better from there; my mile time changed from a ten-minute, to a seven-minute mile! I felt like I was on the top of the world!" It's truly inspiring to see you be able to persevere running and get even better as a result.
I really liked your story. You used great techniques like descriptive language and a great voice. With these techniques it really felt like I had the struggle you were going through and your victory of losing weight at the end. Your introduction was very strong and your technique of using "in your shoes" was really good. It made me picture "standing in front of a scale" and imagining what it would be like being overweight in the fifth grade. The sentences from your piece "I thought that this would be a nightmare! And at first, yeah it was, it felt like torture. My legs felt like garbage after each practice, I always felt bad about myself, being in last, and it felt like a one and one half hour practice was five and one half hours!" really had a great voice. With the great voice in those sentences it really made them engaging and enjoyable to read. Overall your piece was awesome and you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI Have tryed to keep my grades up and pass 8th grade know when I put my mind to it I will succeed.
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