I remember the toy
helicopter that my father had brought home for me and my brothers when we were
young. It was modeled by a French man named Alphonse Penaud. My brothers,
Orville and Wilbur, and I would always play with it outside and around the
house. I loved watching the little wooden propellers on it spin as it came down
from the air. At the time I had wished that I could be the little toy and dance
around, spinning throughout the air. I wished that I could fly.
***
It was another breezy day
at Big Kill Devil Hill in North Carolina. My hair whipped me in my face as the
grass tickled my toes. I loved our extraordinary gliding days. They always gave
me such a rush whenever I was in the air. My dream was to fly, and I hoped to
one day make that possible. I watched as my brothers Orville and Wilbur flew
down the hill, softly landing amongst the sun soaked grass. The grass seemed to
do a little dance in the wind, softly flowing from side to side. I looked at my
brothers climbing back up the hill. I watched the clouds move slowly across the
sky. Sometimes I like to imagine that I was amongst the fluffy white pillows,
or that I was a bird flitting and fluttering around, feeling the wind in my
feathers.
“Do you think one day we’ll
be up there?” I wondered as I pointed towards the brilliant, blue sky.
“I’d say we’re all a bit
nutty to dream of such a thing, but nothing is ever impossible,” Wilbur
responded.
“Tis possible to fly
without motors, but not without knowledge and skill,” Orville claimed as he
gazed upon the clouds. My brothers had always been quite the inventors, and so
was I. We wanted to build our own aircraft one day, but before that there was a
lot we had to learn.
My brothers and I had
spent some time working in a bicycle shop, building our own bikes and repairing
them, so we already knew a thing or two, but this was much more of a challenge.
We spent much time on trying to build our own engine, constantly making more
tweaks and modifications here and there. My brothers and I always loved bird watching,
yet as we watched them more closely, we discovered how they used their wings
for balance and control. My brothers then came up with the concept of wing
warping, which led us to creating a rudder to make the aircraft a bit more
controlled and stable. As I was getting lost in my thoughts I heard some
seagulls off in the distance singing their lovely song.
***
My brothers and I soon
moved to Kitty Hawk, North Carolina to get stronger winds for the aircraft and
testing. We had finished crafting the first model, but then came the hard part,
getting it to fly.
“Can I do the first test?”
I asked excitedly.
“No, we don’t want you to
get hurt,” Wilbur replied. I frowned at him and sighed. I guess I would let him
do the first test. I knew that my brothers were also quite excited because if
it ended up working, then it would possibly change the world.
After working in the bike
and newspaper business, we had gained quite a bit of money. Luckily, it was
enough to fund our big project.
I helped my brothers
wheel the first aircraft to where we were testing. Man was it heavy. Wilbur got
onto the plane, gripping the controls tightly. I could tell that he was
muttering to himself, praying that the aircraft would work. He started up the
engine as it gave off a loud buzzing noise.
Orville and I cheered him on, but I noticed that as he took off, that
the plane was not going up in the air but quite the opposite way. The plane
took a nosedive and headed straight for the ground. The engine sputtered and
eventually gave out. Orville and I rushed over to make sure that our brother
wasn’t injured. Luckily, he hadn’t been injured, but by the look on his and
Orville’s faces, I could tell that frustration was getting to them. The
aircraft was in pretty rough condition, as both of its wings were badly
damaged, and the engine needed repairs. We spent another seven weeks working on
the aircraft. My brothers were now beyond frustrated, and so was I.
“This is going to be the
one. The one where we fly,” I declared with a glimmer of hope in my eyes.
“Elizabeth, I truly hope
so,” Wilbur remarked. I could tell that he was anxious, a drip of sweat sliding
down his face, scared to see what would happen on this test run. I smiled at my
brothers, trying to get their hopes up because they still seemed to have no
faith at all in the aircraft. All I wanted to do was to be with the birds, the
wind blowing in my face, flying through the clouds.
“Please don’t give up on
this,” I said with desperation in my voice.
“We never said that we
were giving up on this. Even though it may look like it, all of us are
determined to fly. As I said before, nothing is impossible,” Wilbur replied
with an exhausted smile. We were all so tired from working on the plane day and
night, barely getting enough sleep. It was clear with the dark bags around all
of our eyes.
“I’ll do the first test
this time,” Orville stated. I sighed, wondering when I’d get my chance to try. One
day I know that I will be there. Up in the sky, flying. As I watched
my brother Orville get on the repaired aircraft, I crossed my fingers in hope
that it would fly.
He started up the engine
once again, yet this time it gave off a slightly less of a noise than the last
time. I watched as he started to take off, the grass pushed and pulled from the
wind. The next thing I knew, I was sprinting after him at full speed, trying to
catch up to the plane as it went higher up into the air. Wilbur and I were
shouting at the top of our lungs, cheering, though I doubt Orville could hear
anything from up there. There was a slight sting of jealousy watching him fly,
but I was ecstatic that it had worked. It worked...It actually worked! I
thought to myself. It was as if all of my excitement and happiness was boiling
inside of me like a volcano about to erupt!
As Orville landed, Wilbur
and I crowded around him in a giant hug. All you could hear was the waves along
the beach as we stood there hugging each other.
“We did it guys,” I said,
the tears flowing down my cheeks like a waterfall.
“Indeed we have,” Wilbur
replied. I could tell that he too was trying to hold back the tears of pure
joy. Orville just kept smiling.
“What was it like up
there?” I questioned, drying my tears with my tattered skirt.
“Oh, why it was
wonderful!” Orville replied, staring up at the sky.
“Oh, I can just imagine
how lovely it must have been,” I said,
gazing upon the clouds.
“Do you want to give it a
go?” Wilbur asked. I looked at him with a face of pure excitement.
“Why of course I do! Let’s go!” I exclaimed. I could hardly contain myself as I lay down on the plane, gripping the controls. I started up the engine as it made the same soft buzzing noise it made before. 3...2...1 I counted down in my head. I began to take off, the wind getting louder and louder every second. I felt the aircraft rising into the air. I glanced down at my brothers cheering for me. I flew forward as the waves crashed along the shore of the beach. I looked to my side and saw a seagull gliding along next to me.
I can finally fly.
-Emma C.
ReplyDeleteHow the story came to life is that you are alluding to the Wright brothers without saying their last name. Another way it came to life is by the central idea which can be multiple things, but the way I saw it is that you can never give up on your dreams even when you are scratched up, and frustrated as it shows in this line, “this is going to be the one. The one where we fly, I declared with a glimmer of hope in my eye.” I also liked what you said in this line, “At the time I had wished that I could be the little toy and dance around, spinning throughout the air.” What I liked about this is that it shows the main characters' dreams.
I am certain that the central idea of this story is self-confidence and courage. I think the message showing these character traits where best shown in the line “This is going to be the one.The one where we fly,”
ReplyDeleteThis line is the key that opens the doors to the main character's amount of hope in this story. I just love when the main character showed how much she cared about this project in the line I declared with a glimmer of hope in my eyes.