Monday, May 1, 2023

       Have you ever gotten stressed about something? Sometimes we work ourselves up over nothing. We can get so worked up. Usually, it starts with something small like at the doctor's, a test, a tryout for a sport, going on the stage, or having to go to the dentist. This reminds me of one time I had to go to the dentist.

       I couldn't sit still. I was yearning to leave. The nurse stepped in and inquired, ¨Could Joe come back with me?¨ I was ready to screech. He isn't going, we are both leaving. I was astonished that I was able to keep myself in my seat. I waited in my seat, fiddling with my fingers, so I tried to think about what I was going to do to get out of this situation!

       It seemed to get even worse the longer I slouched unconformably in the chair. I tried to think of a reason to leave. Nothing came into my head; it was a void of nothingness. Then the most inferior thing happened. My dad strolled out of the hallway, and behind him was the nurse. “Can Amelia come back with me?¨ she summoned. 

       I wasn’t ready. I tried to procrastinate, but I said nothing. I stood in front of the seat. I wobbled nervously to the nurse. “Okay, follow me.¨ She joyfully swiveled around and started the hike into my room. I wanted to say, you have the wrong person, but I couldn’t lie. I followed her even though it was against what I wanted. The hallway was somber, and it felt like the hallway was endless. It was like someone was messing with me. We finally got to our destination. My stomach groaned, not like I was hungry but like it was whining to go home. 

       We strolled into the room. I threw myself into the pale chair. The nurse clipped the gray paper sheet around my neck. I was ready to leave. My hand shook vigorously out of nervousness. Questions filled my head: What is going to happen? Are they going to know? Did I forget to brush my teeth last night, or floss? I heard the snap of the gloves hitting the nurse's palms. They got shiny tools out of a bag. I could hear drills around me. The light antagonized me as the nurse moved it.  

       “Open wide,” they announced. I opened my mouth as wide as possible. I heard metal clinging like they were trying to make music. They'd said something, but I didn’t hear; it was like I had escaped reality.  “What flavor would you like? There's strawberry shortcake, chocolate cake, and mint.” I stared mysteriously at her. I had no idea which one I wanted. I only wanted to go home.

       “Mint,” I blurted out. Why did I say that? I thought. They scraped out the mint toothpaste from the container and wiped it all over the electric brush. They spread it all over my teeth. After that I just sat there looking off at space.

       I finally strolled out of the hallway that used to be frightening, but now it was an ordinary hallway. “ So how did it go?” my father asked.

       ¨It went well I think. No cavities,¨ I answered.

       ¨See, you got worked up for nothing,¨ he replied. 

       That day, I learned a lot about not working myself up. I had wasted so much time on nothing. It didn't change my fate in any case. Now, I can take this lesson and apply it to other things in my life. For example, I used to also get worked up and anxious before performing in pageants, but after this experience I was able to keep my cool during a speech in front of a lot of people. Getting yourself worked up over small things wastes your time, and if you focus too much on the small stuff you´ll miss out on all the big stuff in life.





-Amelia K.






6 comments:

  1. Amelia, I really enjoyed reading your essay. I liked how you used such fascinating words such as, “procrastinate, yearning, inferior and vigorously. I liked how you used the dentist for your main idea, it fits in a lot with working yourself up. I think the moral of this essay is to not worry about the small things in life; Such as the dentist. Great essay Amelia!

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  2. Amelia’s lesson was to not get worked up easily which surprisingly is going to be useful for little kids who have to go to the dentist and they're scared to do it like I was when I was little but the only reason why I was scared is that I wouldn't calm down so they had to put me through a sleeping gas so I can calm down which I freaked out even more.

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  3. great story Amelia! i love your main idea for this story, mature vocab, sensory language amazing!

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  4. Amelia, I like your use of language to describe your feelings and the way they felt to you like when you said, “ The hallway was somber, and it felt like the hallway was endless.” I get that way before a concert or an important doctor's appointment. Finally in the end when you realize it isn’t a big deal shows you the true meaning and the lesson of the story, Big things don’t seem so big once you accomplish them. Amazing work Amelia!

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  5. I really liked how you engaged, you brought up many things that people are usually scared of. I can relate to this because I have been scared of sports tryouts many times. In the end, I ended up making it no problem so there was no point in working myself up. This line shows that there was no point in getting so nervous because it ended up fine, “I finally strolled out of the hallway that used to be frightening, but now it was an ordinary hallway.” That's also the lesson, working yourself up just wastes your time, there are better things to do in life.

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  6. From Natalie D.

    I love your essay. You did such a good job on it, and I can definitely see how you are trying to get the reader to experience your situation. You did such a good job describing what was happening in the moment. You also had a very mature vocabulary, and it made the essay look and sound even better. I definitely know I have been cared to go to the dentist. I used to be terrified to go, but I'm pretty sure everyone has been scared of the dentist at least once. After everything there really is nothing to freak out about. Just like your dad said in the essay, “See, you got worked up for nothing.”

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