School Needs an Update
By: Joshua Green
One of the most prominent problems is that teens aren’t staying in school. A study conducted in 2021 showed 9.6% of teens drop out of school before college, and 40.9% of young adults drop out of college.
For the teens who stay in school, the education they get still isn't satisfactory. Today in the United States, most adults have the reading and writing skills of a seventh grader. “The biggest problem I see with our current age-based system is that it stands in contrast to what we know to be true about children and their development,” says Marry Beth, an assistant professor at a college in Texas.
Our school system was built around producing obeying factory workers. Today the need for these working styles is little to none. These days technology-based and creative problem-solving employees are most valued in the workforce. Another reason the school system is failing is because it is set up to teach every student the same way when not every student is the same. There are three learning styles: visual, auditorial, and kinesthetic. Visual learners learn through seeing, auditory learners learn from listening, and kinesthetic learners learn from moving around and doing. Teachers focus on one of these learning styles, so not every kid takes in the same amount of information. Different learning styles are important because it helps keep students engaged in the curriculum, making them want to learn, leading to more learning.
Mental health is a growing problem in our society, and finally it is being discussed on a wide scale. However, oftentimes the stress and mental toll the education system brings on its students isn't brought up. A study done in 2018 showed over two-thirds of college students experienced overwhelming anxiety, and we are starting to see stress in young children. Schools are trying to make a change, but it is hardly making a dent. On average, there is one counselor per 1000 to 1500 students, and with the caseload of school counselors this is hardly enough.
Bullying has been a problem with school aged students for as long as school has existed, but with the growth of social media, cyberbullying has seen a dramatic increase. A study done in 2019 shows on average 15 percent of 12 to 18 year olds were bullied online or by text; another study done in 2022 showed 46 percent of 13 to 17 year olds experienced at least one form of cyberbullying. In just three years, cyberbullying has more than tripled. One of the reasons for this is schools have no way of protecting students once they leave school, but what happens off of school grounds can still impact that student's ability to do well in school.
Funding is also becoming a problem. According to the Century Foundation, K-12 public schools in the U.S. are underfunded by $150 billion annually. Low budgets lead to unsafe schools. Inadequate funding means schools can’t hire teachers, making class sizes larger, which leads to classes being overpopulated and overwhelming for students and teachers alike.
As time goes on, schools will continue to crumble apart and get more distant from the real world, and unless we do something, this trend will continue. If you think of anything from 180 years ago it will look different today. Now think of classrooms 180 years ago and think of classrooms today. Classrooms almost look identical with few changes, like the implementation of technology in classrooms. If everything else has changed, then why hasn’t school?
Josh’s opinion on this topic is that schools are outdated and aren’t teaching us the right way. I personally agree with Josh’s opinion. I agree with his opinion because I realize that school may be more difficult for other students, but they make all the students learn at the same pace and way as they did 180 years ago. As it says in his editorial, “A study conducted in 2021 showed 9.6% of teens drop out of school before college…” This is showing how some students struggle and don’t like school. This could be from the way schools teach. So in the end, I agree with Josh’s opinion on the way school is. I think we should change it up a little and try something new that maybe isn’t the same as 180 years ago.
ReplyDeleteJosh, I agree with your essay so much. School systems do need change comparing it to everything else that has already changed. Personally, school is a big cause of a lot of my stress. Your statement, “However, oftentimes the stress and mental toll the education system brings on its students isn't brought up.” is very true! The school system does have an effect on everybody. Also your facts, “A study done in 2018 showed over two-thirds of college students experienced overwhelming anxiety, and we are starting to see stress in young children.” is something I have noticed too. The stress put on younger kids could lead to them dropping out of school earlier. Overall the facts you have to back up your opinion are great!
ReplyDeleteYour opinion on how schools teach their students really got me thinking about our schools and the other surrounding school districts. My cousin is in college now and when it was her junior year she was really close to dropping out because all of her friends dropped out. As soon as I started reading I started thinking about her. I support your argument because, “A study done in 2019 shows on average 15 percent of 12 to 18 year olds were bullied online or by text; another study done in 2022 showed 46 percent of 13 to 17 year olds experienced at least one form of cyberbullying.” I feel that schools try to stop bullying, but it never works. In elementary school I feel this is where it all starts. The bullies start acting like the bully and the people who are being bullied are starting to be bullied.
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ReplyDeleteYour story started off with a bang. You got straight into the main problem and explained it very well. You explained to the reader how one of the biggest problems in the world were teens not staying in school, and supported your claim by stating to the reader how you got this information from a college study. While I continued to read through the story, I came up with the decision whether to agree with you or not. I personally do not agree with you and think schools have changed a lot. We now use tons of technology and are learning about so many different topics then they did 180 years ago. In paragraph 5, you express your thoughts on mental health. All though I agree that mental health is important, you don’t talk about the fact of how we have multiple guidance counselors, and have lifes out of school. School may be draining for one, but one's life isn’t entirely based on school. Overall I understand where you are trying to come from, but I do not agree with you.
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DeleteThank you for the comment. First, technology mostly does not change how we learn; it just takes the paper format into an electronic form. You say, “We are learning about so many topics than they did 180 years ago.” I see you got confused about my argument, but never did I deny that the curriculum has changed because the curriculum changed massively from 180 years ago. My argument was that how we learn and are taught has not changed. (Easy to get confused) Again yes, you are correct; OUR school has multiple guidance counselors. We are not the only school; on average, there are not enough guidance counselors per student. Lastly, the drain of school could be fixed for almost all students if changes were made. Again thank you for the comment hope this makes more sense.
DeleteGreat editorial about schools needing updates. I agree with your argument 100%. I am a kinesthetic learner myself, I think that moving around helps my learning process. I agree because I think all different learners need a chance to learn the way they need to. To let their minds run, sitting in a chair for 6 hours a day isn’t helping anyone learn. I think if teachers made their activities fit all different types of learners, some kids would have a better understanding of the material. When you say "schools are underfunded by at least 150 billion dollars;" I think that is a very bad thing. I think if they got that money, they could help some learners, learn better. It makes me very upset when I know that some kids can’t learn as well as other students.
ReplyDeleteJosh Green´s opinion on the school system is that schools have been running the same way for too long and it is time for them to change. I agree with Josh´s opinion because how schools are taking away our creativity. Josh explains how that school was made to create obeying, producing factory workers. He then goes on to state how in the modern world we no longer have as much demand for these types of workers, most companies now want problem-solving innovative workers. But if schools keep teaching us the way they do, making us mindless workers for the masses, it makes it harder and harder for us to get well-paying jobs. This is why I agree with Josh´s opinion on how the school system needs to change.
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