Wednesday, February 28, 2018


My gut howls from hell
A spider made a home there
Weaving in cold air

-Nathan Cao

5 comments:

  1. I thought that the message was to never give up. I thought this because a line was "My gut howls from hell A spider made a home there". This line supports this because it showed that the spider was determined to make a home.

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  2. The mood of the poem set a kind of eerie setting,
    "My Gut Howls From Hell," ,although it was short.

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  3. Giving up on life isnt a option according to your poem Nathan. This poem taught me to never give up on life."From the gut of hell the spider made a home there". This line shows the spider didn't give up no matter the circumstances he had in the gut of hell.

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  4. I really liked the Haiku and I think the message is never give up even though your hopeless and the line supporting that is "weaving in cold air" from "hell".

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  5. This poem is very interesting. The message I got from this was that there's still life when you die. Some people think that once you die you just sleep for the rest of your life but this implies that you still live in your afterlife like in the line "A spider made a home there", the spider still lives and is making a home in hell. It's a short but interesting poem.

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