Great poem! One poetic device used in this poem is an alliteration. In the first line, "Fishing finds me food" and F is used 3 out of 4 times to start a word. This poetic device helps establish the mood of the piece.
Jared, great poem! I really liked the haiku format, it gives it a wonderful simplicity that really highlights the message. From the 2nd and 3rd lines, ("While life is given to death/Fishing finds me life") I can infer the message is to find something that you love and can bring you life.
Jared, I loved your poem! It's amazing how you can turn such a simple topic into a deep poem. The message I took from your poem is that we should all find something that gives us purpose and happiness, to get us through the tough times. Your line "While life is given to death," tells me that even you go through a super hard time, like when a loved one dies, fishing still helps you get through it.
Jared, your poem is very deep. The line "When Life is given to death" could represent a central idea of purpose. When you are fishing, you are taking a creatures life, but you are using it for food that gives you life.
Jared, I like your poem.I think the mood for this poem is happiness, because this poem focus on being positive. One line from the poem is fishing finds me life.
Great poem! One poetic device used in this poem is an alliteration. In the first line, "Fishing finds me food" and F is used 3 out of 4 times to start a word. This poetic device helps establish the mood of the piece.
ReplyDeleteJared, great poem! I really liked the haiku format, it gives it a wonderful simplicity that really highlights the message. From the 2nd and 3rd lines, ("While life is given to death/Fishing finds me life") I can infer the message is to find something that you love and can bring you life.
ReplyDeleteJared, I loved your poem! It's amazing how you can turn such a simple topic into a deep poem. The message I took from your poem is that we should all find something that gives us purpose and happiness, to get us through the tough times. Your line "While life is given to death," tells me that even you go through a super hard time, like when a loved one dies, fishing still helps you get through it.
ReplyDeleteJared, your poem is very deep. The line "When Life is given to death" could represent a central idea of purpose. When you are fishing, you are taking a creatures life, but you are using it for food that gives you life.
ReplyDeleteJared, I like your poem.I think the mood for this poem is happiness, because this poem focus on being positive. One line from the poem is fishing finds me life.
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