Gender inequality is
a mammoth, monstrous, massive problem
Man or woman, it
doesn't matter
We are all the same
We are all humans
We are all equal
We all have the same
purposes in life
To be happy
To prosper
To live
But none of that
should matter
Because in the end we’re
are all sisters and brothers
So let’s unite as a
caring, considerate, cordial family
And become one.
-Kendall Rafferty
I thinkthe mood is to be happy. I think that because it says to be happy and treat everyone the same.
ReplyDeleteI think Kendall's message is to accept everyone no matter where they are from and what has happened to them. Kendall's message states men and women should be accepted as equal as they all have the same purposes and goals in life.
ReplyDeleteMy line supporting that men and women are equal is that we all are human.
DeleteI like how you used alliteration where it says "Gender inequality is a mammoth, monstrous, massive problem."
ReplyDeleteThere is nice repetition with "We are all..."
ReplyDeleteGreat job Kendall! The line "inequality is a mammoth, monstrous, massive problem" tells me that the mood for the start is going to be an issue. It shows the writers perspective on how bad the topic of inequality is. Towards the end the line "We all have the same purposes in life" shows how the person is happy to give the thought of gender equality.
ReplyDeleteGreat Poem Kendall, I think the central idea of this poem is equality. A line from the poem that led me to this is "Man of women, it doesn't matter". I think a message in this poem is We are all human and we should all be treated equally. A line that made me think of this is "We are all humans. We are all equal". The speaker is trying to tell us that inequality is an issue that needs to be addressed.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem! The mood was happy and powerful. The central idea was that we are all equal and should all be seen as the same. A supporting line would be, We are all humans and we are all equal.
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