Chapter
One
The rolling of what
appears to be a train wakes me up. The first thing I do is ponder, where am
I? It, for one, smells awful here, and I have no sense of time or what year
it is. I see other small beings in here, looking sort of like my composure,
status and pose. They look depressed, sickened and queasy. They look like farm
animals in a disgusting barn. I sit up and rub my eyes and see a person next to
me, just thinking of what the future may bring. I ask her, “Where am I?”
She responds, “This group of people is in a
boxcar, I’m sure of that. I just have no clue where we are headed.” Odd. This
just makes me feel like everyone woke up at the same time I did. I probably
just had to sit and wait.
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Days and weeks go on in
the sick and disgusting boxcar. We have been hungry for so long; I just want to
eat someone in our boxcar. I need to eat. But then the train stops. The
door opens. We are free! As we get out, we step on this dewy grass plain with
huge, stone and steel buildings in the distance. There are flags with this
weird, black shape in a white circle on these red banners, and I wonder where
we are. Buildings with smoke rising from the chimneys, soft coughs and screams
are coming from behind the gate that is in front of us. On top of this gate, I
see words. It says, “Arbeit Macht Frei.” I don’t understand what this means,
and I spend a couple of seconds on what it means before a soldier comes towards
our group.
“Stay in the line!” the
soldier shouts in an angry tone. He has an arm patch that has the same thing on
the flag that we saw coming in from the train, and he points his gun at where
the commotion is; the beings that are there go back in the line.
“You. Name, age, date of
birth, ethnicity, and where you are from,” another soldier says to a being to
the right of us. He gives his name, ethnicity, age, date of birth, and where he
is from to the soldier who then writes it down on a chalkboard. The soldier
asks more people, and then he comes up to me.
“You. Name, age, date of
birth, ethnicity and where you are from,” the soldier yells. I realize I don’t
know where I was born, my date of birth, age, ethnicity and name. But then it
comes crawling back to me.
Jenny Lindstromm, March
14th, 1927, Kiev, Ukraine.
“Say it now,” the soldier
says.
“Jenny Lindstromm, March
14th, 1927, Kiev, Ukraine.
“Ukraine doesn’t exist,”
says the soldier. “It is an Eastern Unidentified Territory.”
“Ukraine
is a country that exists!” I reply back.
“Are you sure?” says the
soldier.
“Y-yes,”
I reply back. He writes down OST on the clipboard. He then goes to the next
person in line.
-Anthony B.
I loved how you portrayed the people inside the boxcar, “ They look depressed, sickened and queasy. They look like farm animals in a disgusting barn.”. The sentence worried me about the people inside the box and where they were going.
ReplyDeleteThe history really got brought back to life when he describes the terrible surroundings and state of the boxcar. He really tries and gets the description down near perfect so that it is easy for someone to picture in their head. Also, the allusions were great. When he said he saw the sign that said Arbeit mach frei and the description of the Nazi flag was great. I wasn’t familiar with the term OST, and it turns out it means Ostarbeiter. Ostarbeiters were primarily from Reichkommissariat Ukraine, which is a large portion of Ukraine that was occupied by Nazi Germany. Ostarbeiters were usually treated even more harshly than the civilian workers. The word translates to eastern workers. OSTs were marked with a badge that said OST, or east. Overall, the allusions and descriptions of the surrounding scene are absolutely spectacular.
ReplyDeleteBoxcar is a unique word that brings my mindset all the way back to that time period. When you said “Arbeit Macht Frei.” I immediately knew what your story was based on and it really gave me an idea of what it was like when you said, “soft coughs and screams are coming from behind the gate that is in front of us.” it showed me what it was like and the horrible conditions these people lived.
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