I
saw the colossal, crimson red fire truck pull up outside as I clutched a white
towel with an ice pack to my face. Have you ever made a mistake before? Maybe
you got lacerated, maybe you didn’t. Let me tell you a tale so you can
understand what happens when you don’t think before you act.
It
started on a crystal clear summer day in South Carolina as my family and I
strolled along the shopping square, going into shops here and there. We found a
dog treat shop. It was a diminutive place with a substantial window in the
front of the building.
Inside
the store there were two crowded walls with wooden shelves and legions of baked
dog treats. In the back there was a cut-out with a counter. Behind the counter
there was a worker. There were also two hounds behind the counter with the
employee.
My
mom and dad decided to get some doggy delites for our neighbor's dog because
our neighbors were babysitting our dog. As my mom and dad were surveying the
shelves, where the dog treats fought for room, the store clerk decided to let
the dogs out for me and my sister to pet even though there was a “Don’t Pet”
sign.
I
pulled and pushed my hand through the dog's fur. All of the sudden the dog
snarled at me. My heart skipped a beat.
I should have backed away from the dog and left the dog alone, but I still just
sat there a little shaken. I was still petting the dog a few minutes later when
it suddenly jumped at me. The force knocked me back as the beast tore into the
flesh of my face. I slammed my hand into the muzzle of the creature and shoved
it away.
I
touched my face with trembling fingers as my dad dragged me out of there. I
looked down at my hand, and it was covered in blood like the color of a rubby.
The shopkeeper herded the dogs behind the counter and closed the doggy gate. My
dad sat me down on a chair; the shopkeeper brought over a white towel with an
ice pack. Looking out the blurred front window, my dad told me to keep the
towel constricted to my face.
Finally
I saw the colossal, crimson red fire truck pull up outside as I clutched the
white towel to my face. The sound of the siren was as bad as a baby's whail. As
I hurried outside they finally shut it off. They assessed me and then brought
me to an ambulance to take me to the hospital. The firefighter said I would
have to get stitches. At the hospital I
got a wristband and my own room.
Later
in the day the doctor tried to give me stitches, but I squirmed a lot, so they
had to give me stitches under anesthesia. Afterwards I was still a little
screwy, but I managed.
In
the end, I should've backed off when the dog growled. Thinking before you act
is an important skill to learn. If you think before you act you will make fewer
mistakes.
-Christian H.
Christian, I was shocked to hear this story! It was scary! The force knocked me back as the beast tore into the flesh of my face.” I gasped when I read that! Also: “I looked down at my hand, and it was covered in blood like the color of a ruby.” A story like this happened to my sister. My sister was working and she saw a dog going after her. The dog bit her. The owner ran and he kept saying ``I am sorry! I am sorry”. So we went to the hospital.
ReplyDeleteI think your message in the story was that you should think before you act. At the end, you said,” If you think before you act you will make fewer mistakes.” When the dog snarled at you, you should've backed off and stopped petting it. And now you regret making that decision and you realize you should've thought before you acted. I could use this message for basically everything; If I'm ever in a rough situation, I should think before I make a decision and the outcome will presumably be better.
ReplyDelete“Thinking before you act is an important skill to learn. If you think before you act you will make fewer mistakes.” The message in your story is to think before you act. The lesson I learned is that you should always think about what you are going to do because it could turn out bad. I can apply this lesson to my life by thinking about what the bad outcomes could be and always stick to my first instinct. Nice job!
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