Have
you ever felt like something was over before it even began? Well baseball can make you feel that way. It
was a breezy October day. My team sat solemnly in the dugout, down one in a
game we had to win to move on in the tournament. My coach felt the sorrow in
the air and tried to give us a lifting pep talk.
We
all felt as if the game was over. There
was a solemn feeling like our hearts had been ripped out. They had their best
pitcher on the mound; we knew he threw fast, like a cheetah running through an
open field.
My
teammate, Sam, was leading off the inning. He wasn't confident. “Cmon, Sam!!”
his parents shouted. The pitcher didn't take a single warm up pitch. This got
our engine going as we were all fired up. We were all crammed up against the dugout
fence chanting Sam’s name as he did a light jog up to the plate. We could tell
he was nervous as he looked anxious with each step.
“Strike
one!” the Umpire yelled emphatically. The next pitch boomed in. He took a funky
swing and missed by a mile. “Strike two!”
He anxiously swung his head toward the dugout down in a 0-2 hole. My
coach gave him a head nod letting him know he still had it. He put up a tenacious at bat, fouling off
many pitches, and ended up working a walk. We went crazy as we were trying to
get in the head of the other team's pitcher. Their pitcher looked lost like a
quarterback after throwing an interception.
Now
our line up flipped over to the top with our best hitters. We needed one more
baserunner to get the winning run on first and the tying run on second. Jake
was our leadoff hitter. He ripped a ball into the gap. Sam took off flying,
trying to get to third; he slid in. “Safe!” the Umpire yelled out with a
commanding voice. We got even louder than before.
I
was up. I jogged up to the plate. I felt like all was over and I would be the
rally stopper. I thought to myself, I
gotta preserve and get the ball in play.
I knew all I had to do was get a ball up the middle, and that would get
the job done and deliver us the win. The first pitch zoomed by. “Ball!” the
umpire shouted. He delivered the next pitch. “Ball two!” He shouted again.
I
knew in 2-0 count I was favored as he just had to get a ball over the plate. “You
got this,” I heard his coach shout with a bold tone. I knew what was coming. He
got in his windup in what felt like an eternity. As the ball started coming, I
swung. I heard the sweet crack of the bat; the ball was ripped up the middle.
Sam and Rickey both scored, giving us the win as we went ballistic and into
celebration as he had moved on with a walkoff victory. I felt like I was on top
of the world after feeling like I hit rock bottom.
I
felt as if all was over. But I found a way to persevere and deliver us with the
win. This is why you never give up and persevere until the end, even if you
feel all is lost.
-Kaden G.
Kaden, what I have taken away from this writing piece is never give up, and that your attitude towards something can be the change you need. ¨We all felt as if the game was over,¨ then you later stated, ¨We were all crammed up against the dugout fence chanting Sam’s name.¨ This reminds me of a time where my team was down, 3-1, in the final game of our tournament. Bases loaded; The count was 1-2 and I just swung. Our energy was high and that drove in the 3 runs we needed to win. It's never over until you've done your best.
ReplyDelete“But I found a way to persevere and deliver us with the win.” This is an excellent Qoute it really says a lot about the story. I can relate to this story because im an Athlete and I have that instinct in me that we have to win And persevere through and win. The lesson of this story is to never give up and to keep pushing through thinking in your head that you got this and we can win, together as a team.
ReplyDeleteKaden, good work on your Narrative, you made it feel as if your team was going to lose when you wrote “I heard his coach shout with a bold tone. I knew what was coming. He got in his windup in what felt like an eternity.” Then you wrote “ Sam and Rickey both scored, giving us the win as we went ballistic and into celebration as he had moved on with a walk-off victory. I felt like I was on top of the world after feeling like I hit rock bottom.” This shows that you can throw a curveball into a story and it will always shock someone no matter how many times you read it.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading your piece Kaden, I have come to the conclusion that not giving up and having hope may have been your central idea. Some people may think not giving up is something so simple, but in times like these, you need to remember it. The way you explained how you needed to have confidence in yourself showed not giving up is much more important than we may think. You showed you had to be confident when you stated, ¨I was up. I jogged up to the plate. I felt like all was over and I would be the rally stopper.¨ I can reflect on this in my own life by just remembering to keep trying and have some confidence. Most importantly I can remember never to give up. Great piece Kaden!
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