Wednesday, February 28, 2018

Vacation
Go on a ski trip
That's vacation
Go see family
That's vacation
Go somewhere you have never been before
It’s all vacation
It could be warm or cold
North or south
In this country or another
Hike an old trail with different eyes
Try a new food  
Sit on the beach, like a bird on a perch
Stay up late and sleep in
No school, no work
Take a picture <snap> to savor the moment
It can be near or far
Short or long
It’s all vacation




-Alex Cullum

4 comments:

  1. One powerful line in this amazing poem is "Sitting on the beach, like a bird on a perch". The line has a very detailed simile in it and is explaining how you would be spending your time at that very moment.

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  2. I think the message of the poem is always savor the moment because you never know if you will get to do it again. The lines that supports my message is "Take a picture to savor the moment." I also like this poem because it makes you feel like you are in the moment

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  3. I like the central idea. I think its traveling because when you go on vacation you travel a lot. And I like to travel with my friends and family. I liked the line "Go somewhere you have never been before" because I think people should get out of their comfort zone and try new things.

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  4. I think that you did an amazing job on this poem. the message I got from this poem is to not take anything for granted. I think this is the message because it says "vacations can be near or far short or long its all vacation".

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