How
I got Bella
When we lost Coco to
bone cancer, I thought I would never be able to get over it. I was only seven
years old at the time, so I didn’t really understand what was happening. But
when Coco went to the veterinarian and never came back, I knew she was gone for
good. I was heartbroken that day; I felt like I lost a part of me inside.
My mom thought for a
long time and finally, with careful thought, decided to bring my brother and I
to the pound to adopt two kittens. She thought the house was too quiet without
a dog or any animals in it. I wanted
another dog, but I knew that my mom and dad were not ready for another dog so
soon. So I put the thought out of my head and enjoyed getting kittens. After
both Joey and I picked out our tiny, almost newborn, kittens, I asked my mom if
I could go take a quick look at the dogs. My mom said yes, but she reassured me
that we were NOT getting a dog. I agreed sorrowfully but still went into the
cramped room full of barking dogs.
As I walked in, one dog
in particular caught my eye, a rottweiler, the same breed as Coco. I continued
to go around the room full of dogs, big and small, but I didn’t forget about
that rottweiler. After I finished going around the room, I went back to that
first dog, the rottweiler. I instantly fell in love with her and ran up to the
cage that she was in. Bella licked my face through the cold metal crate that
she had been living in for the past day or two. I was in shock. I never met a
friendlier dog in my life! I ran out of the cramped room like I was running to
the finish line of a marathon. All I could think about was telling my mom;
maybe then she would change her mind about getting a dog.
I begged my mom to come
at least have one quick look at Bella, but she refused, so I kept begging her
until she finally gave in. When she went to look at Bella, I knew she loved her
right away. We asked a worker at the pound if Bella could be adopted yet, but
unfortunately, she was just brought in, so we went home, disappointed. I couldn’t
sleep that night; I was thinking about how scared Bella must have been, all
alone inside that cold metal crate.
The next day we were
back at the pound adopting Bella. I wasn’t surprised that my mom wanted to
adopt her. After all, Bella did lick my face the first time she met me, so in
some ways it was like a sign. By the time we got Bella into our car, packed up
all her things, and payed for her, it was about three o’clock. We wanted to get
Bella back to our house so she could smell around and get used to everything
because we wanted her to feel safe in her new home.
When my mom thought
Bella was used to our house, I started to play with her. I took her out into
our backyard and started throwing an average size tennis ball for her. After
Bella got tired of playing with the tennis ball, I wanted to teach her tricks.
I spent about a whole hour trying to get Bella to roll over; she rolled over
once but never again. So I gave up on teaching her to roll over and started
petting her. I never knew a dog's fur could be so silky and velvety in my life;
Bella’s fur felt like I was stroking a cloud! I continued to pet Bella and her
soft fur until it was time to eat dinner. I ate dinner as fast as I could that
night because I wanted to play with Bella some more before I went to bed. While
I played with Bella, I thought about Coco. I missed her, but I knew that I had
to move on and not get upset about it. All I needed to think about now was my
new dog, Bella. She was family, and that was it.
Ever since that day,
Bella has been part of our family. Bella is now six years old, and she is still
healthy and a great dog to everyone! Bella is a HUGE part of my family
because almost everyone in my family has grown up with a dog or has a dog now.
Bella will continue to be a great part of my family until it’s her time to go
too.
-Hannah
Webber
What an endearing piece! I liked how you used similes such as “ I ran out of the cramped room like I was running to the finish line of a marathon” to add vibrancy to your piece. Your message of overcoming grief is powerful and inspires me to do the same in my life.
ReplyDeleteHannah, this is an amazing piece. I love how you described the way you were feeling at first when you had lost your dog and how your mood started to change when you got Bella. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this. The way that you described that feeling of Bella's fur was extraordinary! It really made me feel like I was experiencing it! I felt that the message of the piece was perseverance. You fought through tough times even after such a hard experience. Again, fantastic writing!
ReplyDeleteHannah I absolutely love the message of your story! I love the way you described your feelings. It helped me understand better, what you went through. Overall, amazing job!
ReplyDeleteI can relate to this piece as I have had to let go many pets in my life, but you really captured the way it feels to get a new family member and how exciting it is! This is an excellent piece and I enjoyed reading it!-Casey
ReplyDeleteI really liked the message of learning to overcome something and moving on. I liked the way you described your feelings, and used some similes. Nice Job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Hannah. I loved how descriptive you were and how many similes you got in the piece. I loved how much perseverance you had when your dog died. You really stayed in there when times got tough. You did a great job, and I can't wait to read another one of your pieces.
ReplyDeleteHannah, your writing piece has a very inspiring message about overcoming grief. Your descriptions of your emotions in the piece are very strong and helped me see the setting of your story better. Another great aspect of your writing is your use of figurative language. Great piece.
ReplyDeleteThe way you described Bella, both physically and emotionally, really added to the story. What I took from this piece is that you shouldn't allow grief from the past stop you from having joy in the future.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good lesson in moving on! I loved the descriptive language used with Bella's description! I'll remember this when we (my family) decide to get a dog!
ReplyDeleteI really want to get a dog but my parents told me no because they say I can barely take care of myself. I like the way you described Bella and how you felt when your first dog passed away. Great job!
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