Prologue
My sneakers pounded
hard against the ground as I fled the gaining authorities, my heartbeat
quickening with every step. I skidded around a sharp corner, making me stumble,
and I nearly fell over. I sighed in relief as I regained myself, glancing
behind me to see if I had outrun them. Nope. Light flooded the large, dark, and
empty tunnel, alerting me that the officers were on my toes. It smelt faintly
of gasoline, making me wonder what these tunnels were even used for.
I was fast. Very fast,
but so were they. There was a loud, ear-piercing cry of pain; it didn’t sound
like any officer.
Then it hit me like a ton of bricks.
“Colby!” I screamed, my heart
lurching at the thought of Colby, the most innocent person alive, getting hurt.
Policemen surrounded me, all pointing their blinding flashlights in my face. “We
have to help him!” I stopped running and whipped around toward the men, my eyes
pleading.
“Hands in the air, kid!”
One of them ordered, but I kept on screaming. “Colby!” I repeated. “Let me go!
I need to find Colby!”
“I said, hands in the
air!” He roared, and I complied, raising my arms up over my head and choking
out a small sob of “Please.”
A large, muscled
policeman walked behind me and grabbed my arms, forcing them down roughly and
behind my back. A click was heard, and then I was no longer free. I hung my
head in defeat as I was escorted out of the tunnel by two of the men. I
clenched my jaw and blinked away the tears that were threatening to fall.
Colby is one of those
people who will apologize a million times just for running into you in the
hallway. You can’t help but wonder if they’ve had a traumatic experience as a
kid involving being trampled or something, and it makes you feel extremely
guilty, even though it was a small mistake. Colby Brown, President of the AV
club and the D&D (Dungeons and Dragons) club, would never do anything that
would result in him, or anyone else, being arrested.
That’s why all of this
was my fault.
Now you’re probably
wondering how I got myself into this situation, right? Well, stay tuned, since
I’m going to start from the very beginning…
Chapter
One
It was a typical Monday
morning, mainly typical because I couldn’t get out of bed again. I was too busy
dreaming of being a part of, and winning, the Super Bowl.
“Logan!” My mother
called up to me, her voice sweet and kind. The scent of warm chocolate chip
muffins wafted into my room somehow, which would usually get me out of bed, but
in this case it did nothing.
“Logan, Sweetie, it’s
time for breakfast.”
“Coming,” I called back
weakly, my voice unusually husky. I trudged down the stairs as it was one of those
days.
My mom got one look at
me and gasped.
“Honey, you look awful!”
“Wow, thanks, Mom,” I
said sarcastically, adding an over-the-top eye roll for effect.
“No, I mean you look
sick. Is everything okay?”
“Yeah,” I lied,
striding into the kitchen. Although everything was not okay. The night before,
I had gone over to Miguel’s house with Colby and eaten a huge box of donuts as the
result of a dare. Not that I had minded at the time, but the donuts were
apparently prodded by Miguel’s younger sister Erica after she had been in the
playhouse at Chuck E. Cheese. This information was not disclosed to me until
after I had eaten the entire box. Thanks, Miguel.
“Logan, don’t lie to
me.” My mom stared at me with the look that only mothers could manage to
pull off, and then I caved in with a sigh.
“Fine,” I groaned, then
told her the story. Her eyebrows were knitted in a look of pure concern the
entire time, making me feel a tinge of regret.
“Go back to bed, Hon. I’ll
bring you up some muffins later.” My mother gave me a loving smile and walked
away swiftly.
I sighed and spun
around, practically dragging myself back upstairs and onto my bed.
Sure enough, when I
woke up again, there were chocolate chip muffins perfectly placed on a tray by
my bedside like they were there to be photographed for a baking magazine. I sat
upright and my head pounded, especially behind my sore, brown eyes. I pulled my
blankets further up on my body, suddenly feeling very cold and shivering like a
chihuahua. Good thing my mom made me stay home today.
I laid in my bed for a
while before taking out my very ancient DS and playing Mega Man X, since
it was what was already in there. I got really far on one level before I died,
cursing under my breath.
My phone buzzed loudly,
so I jumped in surprise. It was a text from Miguel.
Miguel:
Hey! Just wondering where you were, since you missed first and second period
with Mr. Lancaster, and I had to do a whole lab on my own
Logan:
Sorry, I just woke up sick and my mom’s not letting me go to school today
Miguel:
Aww man that sucks! Hope ya feel better
Logan:
Thanks dude
I put my phone down and
gazed longingly at the muffins before taking one. I scarfed it down in seconds,
grateful to my mom for putting them there in the first place. “She probably
went to work,” I mumbled to myself, crumbs falling out my mouth as I did so. “Otherwise,
she’d be in here worrying over me.”
Hours passed, and so
did my entertainment. I thought about watching tv, but I couldn’t get myself up
to do so. I told myself that it was because I was too sick to walk, but I knew
in my heart that I was just really lazy. I rolled over so my back was to my
door, and I noticed my (very large) walkie talkie lying next to me.
It looked very
inviting, so I gave in and turned it to the right channel. Colby, Miguel and I
all had them so we could be like the kids in Stranger Things, and I
think it’s just cool in general. I held down the button on the side and put it
up to my face.
“Colby? Miguel? Do you
copy?” I croaked, sitting up in my bed. No response. “If you can hear me, meet
me by Cornwallis after school, 3:15. Over.” Picking up my phone with my free
hand, I checked the time; 1:47 pm. I would have to wait a while. I put down my ‘talkie
and slowly slid off of my bed, making my way over to my window and opening the
curtains.
The sun was blindingly
bright compared to the dim light of my bedroom, and it seemed to reflect off of
everything. It made the chocolate brown of my room look almost tan, and it hurt
to look at my pure white furniture. I squinted against the sun and surveyed the
empty streets of my neighborhood, feeling a strong desire to get on my bike.
The sky was a cloudless blue, and the multi-colored houses made my street look
like an illustration from a children’s book. I was just itching to get
out of the house, my boredom overpowering my sense of judgement. I decided to
go with my boredom.
I zoomed down the
stairs and out the door, scurrying over to the garage where my bike was kept.
The door opened at the touch of the button, and I snagged my bike and helmet,
throwing one of them back into the garage. And I can tell you for a fact that I
did not throw my bike. I hopped on and pedaled down the smooth driveway and
onto the bare streets. I knew my way around by heart, and I used this to my
advantage.
The trees swayed
rhythmically against the autumn breeze, their leaves bright red and orange. A
few leaves fell gently down to the ground, some blowing right in my face and
disorienting me for a split second. I swerved a bit before continuing to go
straight, avoiding any other falling leaves. Why did the leaves have to fall,
why can’t they just disintegrate instead of bothering me and killing the grass
they land on?
Once I made it to the
school, I cycled up to the bike rack and locked my bike in safely. Last time I
forgot to, and somebody decided to take it for a ride instead of asking me
first. Now I know! Would you look at that, I learn from trauma!
I snuck around to the
back of the building and peered in through one of the windows. Yes! There he
was, Miguel, being bored to tears by Mr. Pepino.
At least, that’s what
we call him. His actual name is Mr. Peppa, but one of the Spanish classes
thought it was funny to call him “Mr. Pepino” (Mr. Cucumber, for those who don’t
know Spanish), and the name stuck ever since. Man, it never gets old.
Miguel was conveniently
seated next to the window I was by, so I tapped lightly on the glass in morse
code. I watched him look over at me in pure shock, but of course he
couldn’t say anything. Dash dash. Dot. Dot. Dash. I continued until I
had tapped out ‘MEET ME AT CORNWALLIS’. Miguel nodded in understanding and
showed me a scribbled out ‘okay’ on a light blue sticky note. He and I smiled
mischievously, and then I tapped ‘I’LL GET COLBY’. Miguel nodded again and
pretended to listen to Mr. Pepino.
Colby was harder to
reach. He was in History with Mrs. Weppler, Miguel’s mother. Sure, she was kind and motherly at
home, but the moment she’s in the school building it’s like she’s a completely
different person.
“Very uptight,” Mr.
Pepino used to say. “You crazy lot could use the discipline.” I used to think
that was bull, but now I kind of understand. Tough love, I guess. However,
intended or not, Mrs. Weppler was definitely a pretty scary woman. Miguel acts
like her sometimes, and it’s a real change compared to his normal behavior.
That’s how you know he’s not messing around.
Anyway, Mrs. Weppler
was terrifying, so I decided against going to Colby just yet. I reached my hand
into the pocket of my dark jeans, feeling around for my wallet. Bingo! I pulled
it out swiftly and checked inside. I had a fifty, a twenty, and then a bunch of
singles. I could definitely afford some lunch.
There was a small,
shabby, rundown diner right across from the school where I sometimes stopped
for a bagel or two. Their food was cheap, and I could get something for my dad,
who worked long hours in a smelly factory. He loved... I couldn’t even tell you
the name of it, since all the paint faded on the worn out sign for the place.
I quickly (and
carefully) crossed the street, jogging up to the entrance and pushing the old,
greasy glass door open. When I stepped in, I was immediately hit with the
delicious scent of the bakery goods, and I forgot what it smelt like to breath
fresh air. The air was thick and warm, but hey, at least it didn’t smell like
the gym locker room.
“Logan!” A very thick
Italian accent called to me. The owner’s name was Giovanni, and he knew me by
name.
“Giovanni! How’s it
shaking, amico?” I responded, sitting down on one of the bar stools that
sat in front of the glass food display. Giovanni loved to teach me some Italian
while I waited for my food, and some of it actually sticks. He looked very
pleased and gave me a toothy smile, leaning against the counter casually.
“Cosa posso fare per te?” The dark-haired, mustache-wearing man asked, and it took me a moment to translate it. Since I’m assuming many of you are like me and are not fluent in Italian, he said, “What can I get for you?” But if you are fluent in Italian and I’m wrong, then I apologize. I’m not the sharpest tool in the shed, let’s be real here.
“Cosa posso fare per te?” The dark-haired, mustache-wearing man asked, and it took me a moment to translate it. Since I’m assuming many of you are like me and are not fluent in Italian, he said, “What can I get for you?” But if you are fluent in Italian and I’m wrong, then I apologize. I’m not the sharpest tool in the shed, let’s be real here.
“Um, can I have four
bagels? Two blueberry and two french toast, per favore.”
“Coming right up!”
Giovanni slowly turned around and shouted something in Italian to one of his
workers, but it was too fast to catch. That same worker yelled something back,
and then brought Giovanni my order.
Reaching back into my
pocket, I started to pay, but then Giovanni refused.
“No no no, it’s on the
house, amico. You come here very often, yes.” I raised my eyebrows in
surprise.
“Thanks, man. I’ll see
you tomorrow?”
“I hope so.” Giovanni
handed me the bagels and I started back toward the exit, a smile plastered on
my stupid face.
-Molly MacDonald
Molly, awesome job! I love how well you described everything and really made me feel like I was in the story. I also love all of your descriptive language.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job Molly! The prologue was so cool and ave me great background information. You had so much descriptive language and your story just flowed. I really hope that there is going to be a chapter two. Also I loved the dialog in you story. you did a great job and keep it up.
ReplyDeleteMolly, I really liked your description in the story and it really had an important lesson to learn. Your prologue really catched my attention and this one chapter made me way to read more!
ReplyDeleteThis was really engaging from start to finish. You had really good dialogue and an engaging story. It makes me really want to read chapter 2!
ReplyDeleteMolly MacDonald, The prologue of your story was amazing. Your description was on point and I could see everything taking place like a movie in my head. It was very professional. One thing I learned from your story was to listen to my parents. This is partially and inference but if the boys would of done what they were supposed to (sayed in school and at home), they probably would have never gotten in trouble. I can apply this to my own life by remembering that my parents know what is best for me and I should listen to them. GREAT JOB!
ReplyDeleteI want to read the rest! The prologue was very intriguing and well written. My favorite part was in the beginning of the first chapter with all of the description you added to bring life to it. I hope I will be able to read the rest of this story!
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