Chapter
One
There is a whoosh as a
young boy opens a compartment and slides himself in. He is small and fits
easily. His hair is a burning red and his eyes are brown. Muttering, he grasps
a lever and pulls it. Moving faster than the speed of light, he travels back in
time to the construction of the Transcontinental railroad. And stops.
He has come to relive the
past, the outcome of the railroad.
Crash Bang Boom.
The young boy looks
around curiously. He is alone, only in the company of the past. He looks at the
mountains with the whitening tops and the green valleys. The Sierra Nevada
mountains.
They look magical,
soaring even higher in the air than some of the birds. They touch the sky. The
mountains are so majestic; they seem to stand as if they will never move. They are things that will be ruined by what
is to come. The wind is light, softly blowing, and the sun shines like a fire.
Little Ludo hurriedly
walks to an edge where people, workers, are gathered, hammering tracks and
lowering themselves in reeds to explode the dark, dangerous mountain. It stands
silently as birds soar in the brightening sky. The sun is fully up now,
blazing, and the laborers are like robots, constantly and endlessly working.
Ludo watches in wonder, like a person first seeing the sunlight after so much
darkness.
The workers look
miserable in the heat, the fire burning against their bodies. But they are
diligent; they work hard. And they’re being taken advantage of. No, they’re not
treated fairly, paid significantly less than the Irish workers who constantly
complain about their wages. But being immigrants, the Chinese workers
have to pay taxes without even having citizenship. They wear ripped, ash covered
clothing, and sweat is dripping down their bodies like a shower of rain.
They are speaking a
language he doesn’t understand, and the young boy listens, the incomprehensible
words washing over him. He’s fascinated, as if he’s witnessing a solar eclipse.
He wants to know. He wants to work.
Reeds are lowered,
dynamite is lit, and the workers, in their burnt and ripped clothes, flee from
the blasting dynamite like they are being chased by an evil monster. Again and
again, light fills the air. Bright and burning hot, it sears the workers and
everything near them. The rocks from the mountain crack open and shower onto
them all like a waterfall. The Chinese workers have the most dangerous job of
all, as dangerous as standing on the edge of a black hole.
“RUN! RUN!” They shout in
their language, sprinting on the rough mountain ground.
Still, the boy watches,
overwhelmed by curiosity. A supervisor watches too. He reclines lazily in a
chair and gazes down at the workers with an arrogant look of importance on his face.
He sits on the green, vivid, grassy area approximately three meters above the
others. There is shade from the rocks above him; they shelter him from the sun.
The supervisor is a manatee, eating a plant, with arms like slippery flippers.
“WORK!” He shouts, his
voice sending waves through the wet, humid air.
“Sir! Sir!” The boy
shouts, running up to the man. He trips on the sharp rocks and lands on an already laid train track. It feels
smooth like a dolphin's skin. His face is covered in a dark mask of dust.
He doesn’t want it for
money, but for experience and knowledge. This is all so fascinating to
him. He doesn’t know about the
unfairness. He doesn’t know it yet, but soon, he’ll see. The funny thing is,
this job, this unfair job, is still better than what the workers had before.
“Mister sir, I’ll work
too! I want to work!” Ludo says brightly, his voice echoing in the immense,
mountainous area. The Sierra Nevada Mountains.
-Sophia Wang
They wear ripped, ash covered clothing, and sweat is dripping down their bodies like a shower of rain.this part is descriptive writing because it talks about what they were wearing and how sweaty they were like if it looked look if they came out of the amazon rain forest.
ReplyDeleteYour writing piece was really descriptive. I loved the line, "The wind is light, softly blowing, and the sun shines like a fire." The simile added a nice touch to this sentence, great job!
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