Long ago, it was said
that humans were friends with dragons. It is thought that humans and dragons
once walked on an equal ground of peace, their lifestyles intertwined, humans
and dragons coexisting in unity and friendship. Humans healed dragons from
illnesses that would otherwise have caused death, and dragons allowed humans
the gift of flight, their powerful wings imbued with potential to go places
beyond a human’s imagination. There weren’t the constant struggles for
supremacy, or the endless battles to prove that one race was stronger and
better than the other. There wasn’t the constant worrying of one group
attacking another, the constant fear of being pierced to death or going up in
flames. It was peaceful; it was perfect.
That must have been a very long time
ago.
Cally gritted her
teeth, elbows scrunching in an
accordion-like motion to propel herself upwards another centimeter on the
jagged cliff face. Her hair swung in wispy chords down her back, her silver
ponytail an annoying itch that plagued her with its irritating presence. The
rest of the world spanned out below her, treetops bobbing in various heights
along the ground, forming a dark, uneven carpet that covered the entire expanse
of forest. Below her ravens cawed, unaware of her predicament and need to
focus; occasionally, a few flitted around her head, chirping ominous songs of
death that made her climbing shed much of its efficiency. Night was her best
friend, saturating the air with a vantablack hue that obscured her from view.
Far above her, Cally’s
fellow Perditha climbed steadily with indomitable efficiency and speed, her
muscled limbs reaching tirelessly towards the dark sky. She did so by driving
twin daggers into the side of the cliff, then slipping them out consecutively
and vigorously reinstalling them several feet higher; the Perditha, the kingdom’s
dragon fighters, were known for being agile, for being quick. The title was
also the word for “lost” in latin; Perdithas weren’t known for surviving long.
Cally was climbing the
hard way, unlike her determined friend, Ivy. Her fingers were riddled with
cuts, bruises, and patches of gravel. Ivy, as a reward for her effort, was
almost to the top; Cally, fulfilling all self-expectation, had a long way to
go. Crickets chorused mournfully and at random intervals, like a dysfunctional
orchestra stumbling through a minor song. The moon was a leering smirk, its
glowing sneer chastising her for her slowness. She scowled up at the moon,
taking a moment to glare at the glowing tear in the inky black tapestry of the
sky. Smaller holes were poked surrounding the moon….stars. They filled up the
sky in scattered clumps, making it look like someone had splatter painted the
sky with ivory. Cally blinked, shaking her head to release her sweaty bangs
from her forehead; then she remembered she had a job to do.
Spurred on by the
reminder, Cally’s boots filed up the rocky surface, her hands stealing out in
the dark to capture whatever she could hold to pull herself up; several minutes
of voracious climbing put her only a few feet below her friend, who was still
methodically stabbing her way up the cliffside. Cally panted, the surge of
effort molding layers of pain into her aching muscles. Yet she persevered,
loping up the cliff face in clumsy, aching strides, her arms feeling as if they
were being stabbed repeatedly with Ivy’s sharp daggers; she released a soft
groan, which echoed into the empty night and was lost in the grating hoots of a
choir of owls somewhere in the distance. Cally’s sword dug into her side, its
metallic presence radiating a chilling cold into her rib cage. It was still
dark and getting darker; Cally’s tired arms seemed to be driving paths through
thick oceans of tar, desperately reaching for a handhold poking through the
thick darkness. Her hand closed around a cone-shaped rock that stuck out like a
horn on the monstrous looming cliff. Cally swung her feet up, finding a brief
moment of rhythm in the chaos of her tangled limbs. She moved in step with Ivy,
arms and legs reaching to fill up the space measured by the trail of holes left
in Ivy’s wake. She crawled alongside the holes, grabbing and pulling and
gradually reaching Ivy’s level, where she turned and shined a quick smile of
triumph on her friend.
Ivy’s hand lay limp
against her sweaty forehead, though not to rest; she was scouting out the
horizon, her grass-green eyes analyzing what lay ahead with a scrupulous focus.
Unlike Cally, Ivy was not easily distracted and had an iron will that was
stronger than her lithe daggers; she was the epitome of what a good Perditha
should be- dedicated and loyal and strong as a tiger. A hit from her had the
force of a freight train; she threw punches like she was born with her hands
curled into fists, and every kick she placed was aimed and executed with deadly
accuracy. Ivy was a weapon, fiery and fierce, and she was the strong one on
their team of two. She prefered fighting her enemy close up, but sometimes she
resorted for the more deceptive skill of burying her daggers into the body of
her victim. Cally, unlike Ivy, fought as unfairly as possible. She wasn’t
strong, but she was lithe and quick. She wasn’t powerful, but she compensated
for her lack by stealing every advantage she could hold over her enemy. She
backstabbed, rolled, and tripped (the enemy, of course, sometimes herself too,
but that was irrelevant). Her weapon, a large gleaming sword with a designed
bronze hilt, slashed and dismembered with the same graceless force that she
herself employed in battle.
Cally slipped and swung
her feet together, her sword colliding hollowly against her thigh, and the
thick heels of her boots clanking noisily against each other as both of her
feet accidently gave up their positions and came to a grinding halt beneath her
shaking arms. She reached her left arm through the obsidian-colored atmosphere,
fingers reaching out and coming up empty. There was nothing left of the
cliff! Silver stars hung like diamonds
up above, glittering, mocking her weakness and inability to move. Her fingers
flailed in panic in the cold air.
For a terrifying moment
in time, Cally’s entire weight was concentrated on her right arm, and pinpricks
of intense pain drove a thousand sharp needles into her muscles; her left hand
curled, fingers bent and hovering over nothing. Weightless, Cally felt the wind
tugging her hair back as it gently coaxed her into a fall; for a moment in
time, Cally hung over a distant floor of vague treetops, feet about to push
off, her aching arm releasing its hold on life one aching finger at a time.
Pain blinded her, swarming her vision and filling up the darkness in front of
her with a pulsing wall of red; Cally’s right arm finally gave out, thrusting
back emphatically and surrendering her to gravity’s clutches; she would have
plummeted to her death that instant had a hand not reached down from above and
wrapped around hers, yanking her up and depositing her in a clumsy heap on the
top of the cliff.
“Come on,” Ivy
whispered, her bright green eyes glinting through the dark with determined
energy. She reached out again and hauled Cally to her feet, her strength making
the motion seem effortless and Cally seem as weightless as a stick figure cut
out of paper. In one fluid motion, Cally and Ivy turned in unison to observe
the ominous cliff that loomed before them. The cliff was an arch of stone, cold
and thick and shrouded in a thin coat of moonlight that spilled down from the
sky and highlighted the dust and gravel that coated the jagged cave’s exterior;
inside the cave darkness loomed like a pulsing heart, dangerous and foreboding,
radiating an aura of danger and throbbing terror. Cally backpedaled, her
footsteps resounding against the ground as she readied herself with several
deep breaths. Ivy ran for the darkness, her red hair a rippling flag as she
headed for the inky black hole in firm, quiet strides. Cally, with much more
caution, loped with gentle footsteps towards the daunting dark, her hand glued
to the hilt of her gleaming sword.
Suddenly, Ivy shrieked,
her pale freckled face suddenly illuminated by a burst of flaming light; a ball
of fire burned a hole in the atmosphere, striking a match against the thick
darkness of the night. Ivy plunged backwards, fingers automatically reaching up
to stroke the scorched end of her ponytail, which was now several inches
shorter due to exposure to scorching flames. Cally rushed to her friend’s side,
observing and calculating to discover with relief that her friend was not hurt,
only singed and startled. “This one’s dangerous,” Ivy whispered; she glanced at
the cave, which had returned to its gloomy dark state, devoid of flaming
spheres. “ And….” she paused, her expression shifting as her brain fumbled for
words. She continued, decidedly, “Different. Very different.”
Ivy paused again, then
opened her mouth with a serious expression, her face forming the implacable
position that spoke of a subsequent lecture when Cally held up a hand to cut
her off.
Cally straightened her
posture, trapped a single strand of silver hair behind her ear, then tried to
sound confident when she said, “ You’re going to say something noble, aren’t
you? I can handle this, trust me. “ She opened her mouth to continue, racking
her brain for proof that she was as strong and capable as she claimed.
Ivy saved her from the
resulting silence by commanding, “ I can
do this. You just wait for me to come out, maybe come in if you hear me
screaming….But don’t go in first, ok? Ok?” The repetition of “ok” was received
by empty air; Cally was already running, bolting as if she were running across
a lake of fire, sprinting as if her life depended on it. “Cally! Cally, stop!
You’re going to get yourself killed! “Cally let the words follow her into the
cave; she marched through the jagged stone entrance, steps resounding as her
boots met the uneven, rocky surface of the cave floor. The cave was commodious,
a gigantic dwelling for the massive pit darkness that filled the cave to
overflowing and spilled outside, becoming one with the black night. The ceiling
was too high to be visible at night, even with the faint sliver of moonlight
that impaled the dark outside. Wind whispered through the trees, the faint
sound echoing through the cave in a wave of thrumming hisses. Ivy stomped in
behind her, instantly barging in front of her to shield her from any potential
fiery projectiles that might travel their way.
“Hello?” Cally glared up at the ceiling of the cave, a
wave of annoyance threading an angry tone into her voice when she yelled,
louder: “Hello? I just climbed a cliff to find this place and kill you!” The
noise echoed, shrill and piercing in the silence. Ivy made strangled shrieking
voices in her throat. “You should at least have the decency to show up!” At
that point, Ivy clamped iron fingers around Cally’s mouth, cutting off the flow
of sounds to highlight the silence, leaving only the dull thrumming of birds
chirruping and leaves being pushed around by the wind. Quiet. Calm. Then fury.
The air was suddenly
saturated with the pulsing sound of wingbeats, whooshing with unimaginable
strength and dumping tides of air onto Cally and Ivy. Ivy’s breath was warm in
her ear, whispering,” Run.” Cally
might have been terrified, but she wasn’t a coward. She swept sweaty strands of
her thin silver hair behind her ear, wiping her clammy palms against her rough,
dirt-covered jeans. She nailed her legs into the ground like thick metal
columns and readied her sword in a moist, constantly readjusting grip; her blue
eyes sifted through the darkness to capture a creature moving at the top of the
cave. Darkness made clarity impossible, but Cally could make out a vague shape
that had been silently lurking in the center of the top of the cave. She saw
coils of thick muscle that covered the
half of the surface area of the cave’s ceiling, contorting and contracting and
unwinding into a shape that grew closer and dangerously nearer.
A crescendo of
battering wingbeats announced the arrival of the dragon. It was massive,
tearing a hole in their field of vision and dominating the cave with its array
of leathery wings and overlapping metallic scales. Then came a flash of
glinting fangs, two large ones at the top of its mouth, two small ones peeking
out towards the bottom of its enraged scowl; the dragon roared, the ground of the
cave vibrating with the pulsing grumble of fury that was accompanied by a
bright flash of fire, which shot out like an arrow swarming with tones of
yellow, orange, and red, swerving and twisting until it hit a corner of the
cave and ignited a small fire that burned steadily.
Cally watched from the
ground, her heart palpitating; the light warmed her face and and reflected a
burning streak in her eyes as she gaped, having been shoved to the cold stone
floor by Ivy just moments before. Ivy crouched by her, singed ponytail whipping
back and forth as her green eyes flashed anxiously, her pale face rotating at
the speed of lightning to follow the path of five more flames shot after
another set of angry bellows. Every streak of flames was followed by a thundering
crackle, light consuming patches of twigs and coal to form burning patches in
all the corners of the room. The tongues of flame licked at the air, emitting
an incandescent aura of warm light; their pulsing glows filled the cave, the
dark shrinking back as the air filled with a gentle yellow. Cally stood up,
involuntarily sucking in a breath; the dragon was beautiful, not sickly and icy, like the first
dragon she’d fought, or oily and slippery and eelike like the second. This one,
however, possessed an ethereal beauty unlike anything she’d ever seen. This
dragon was fire. Its scales were a mosaic of metallic red and orange, sprinkled
with an occasional smattering of gold. The fire glinted off its majestic dinner
plate-sized scales; its talons were curved like silver crescents, gleaming and
scraping against the ground as it shifted its powerful legs and folded up its
wings behind its back. There was a great torrent of rustling sounds as the
dragon’s wings contracted and folded neatly until they were parallel to its
back. The dragon flexed its front legs, muscles rippling in the thick,
tree-trunk shaped columns. Its eyes were pools of amber, dark and fierce,
reflecting miniature forms of the fire burning in the cave and Cally’s gaping
face. Its shining metallic scales shone, flickering with their fiery hues. The
dragon shifted slightly, fixing its intense golden gaze on her. This dragon was
beauty. This dragon was power.
This dragon was
miserable.
Pain flashed through
the dragon’s fierce eyes, glinting in the intimidating amber and giving the
dragon a fierce look softened by melancholy. The dragon did not move, though it
occasionally exposed its slender, sharp fangs, and simply fixed her with its
unusual stare. The look held tiredness, if you looked deep enough, desperation,
if you bothered to notice. Cally could tell, just from those eyes. This dragon
didn’t want to fight.
The dragon’s eyes
flashed, the tangle of emotion lost as blazing rage claimed its angry gaze. It
growled, a deep, low sound that filled the cave with minute vibrations that
pulsed against the ground and into Cally’s boots. Plumes of smoke drifted in
the air, filling the atmosphere with a light translucent haze and the faint
smell of ash and combustion. Ivy’s head appeared over the dragon’s head, her
friend’s boots snapping around to straddle the dragon’s neck as Ivy attacked
with vengeance, punching the dragon’s neck and driving a dagger against its
flinty exterior. She left the dagger there as the dragon howled, wasting no
time in kicking at the dragon’s strong legs and slicing tallies of blood down
its skin. The dragon roared, its tail whipping out to smack Ivy off its leg and
onto the cold cave floor below. Ivy let out a small moan, rubbing bruised limbs
and laying momentarily paralyzed beneath the dragon’s writhing tail. Cally drew
her sword again, and this time she charged.
Her fighting instincts
took over, every step a reflexive motion, every action just a part of a
graceful routine; each movement flowed easily into the next, every motion
dropping seamlessly into another attack or defense maneuver. Apparently, her
vigorous training had actually paid off. Cally rolled, coming up with her sword
in her hand and her pulse a raging roar in her ears. She lunged, glinting steel
biting into the sliver of space between two of the dragon’s scales, piercing
through its glowing armor and eliciting a groan of pure agony from the dragon.
The dragon turned on her, its golden eyes suddenly bright with fury and that
same unidentifyable emotion; Cally ducked, the dragon’s fiery blast a sparking
column that singed her hair as it streamed overhead. Seeing its eyes again,
Cally couldn’t help but wonder…..Did it really want to fight? Of course- all
dragons did, didn’t they? Then why did this dragon seem so burdened and
reluctant?
In the minute gap of
her wandering thoughts, Ivy had sprung up despite multiple contusions and now
employed her punches and kicks with unforeseen strength and tireless fury. Ivy’s
fists rained down like hail, beating down into the dragon’s side until dents
and fractures marked the dragon’s once-impeccable scales. Ivy sprung back to
avoid the dragons returning tail, stepping back while flicking her wrist to
send a sharp steel blade twisting through the air. The dagger flew, almost in
slow motion, turning a full circle in the air before it started to descend. And
both Ivy and Cally did what any human would do; the average gut reaction to
slow, gently arcing objects that are falling to through the air.
They watched. Their
eyes trailed the glinting steel, lit by firelight and diving gracefully
downward.
While Ivy’s eyes
flicked up for merely a second, that was just enough time for the dragon’s next
fireball to hit home, engulfing the brave Perditha in a shell of warm
flickering flames. If the air wasn’t already saturated with smoke, it
definitely was now. Cally sensed the musky, dry texture fill the air and had
just enough time to turn and glimpse her friend collapse; Ivy’s shrieks pierced
her heart, black crawling up the girls light skin as it charred and flaked off
as gray ashes, until the air was so filled with ash that the cave could have
been under a gray blizzard of or in the inside of a colored snow globe. Cally
felt tears sliding quickly down her face like rain on a car windshield. She could
feel the sobs that racked her throat, salty tears choking her as she let out
cries of agony. She could feel pain in her heart, a pulsing thrum that pattered
with her heartbeat. The dagger landed
its target and sunk into the dragon’s back; Cally ran to her friend’s side, her
hands trembling as tears pooled at the corners of her eyes, and she knelt by
the pile of ashes, gently trailing her fingers over the fine gray dust; her
tears splattered onto the ash, clear drops gently implanting themselves into the
smoking powder. She turned to face the dragon, her rage a furnace that filled
her, spreading heat into every bone of her body and streaming across every part
of her soul, calling her sword to her hand.
Suddenly, she was fire.
She was fury. She was vengeance.
Adrenaline raced in
currents through her body, her sword moving like an extension of her arm; her
running, jumping, and pivoting feet were in time with the rapid tempo of her
heartbeat. Her anger burned and pulsed; she slashed out with her sword, a
current of blood spraying her as her dagger cut into the dragon’s thick tail,
slicing off its tip. The dragon growled and shot more flames, setting fire to
Cally’s sleeve as it twisted its tail away from her. She rolled and came up,
her sleeve smoking, her eyes burning from smoke and her refusal to blink. The
world sharpened into high definition, pulling into focus. There was no cave, no
crackling fire, nothing. There was only the battering of her mercilessly raging
sword, the dragon, and her blazing fury. She attacked the dragon’s legs
emphatically, making ridges and cuts with the side of her steel sword. The
dragon lashed out with more flames, and she drew back, blood dripping from her
sword onto the cave floor as she scrambled into a quick retreat. She then
rushed at the dragon, a roar of fury gathering and intensifying in a deafening
crescendo; her boots battered against the the floor with the sound of
relentless thunder; her arms pulled up as her hands wound themselves around the
warm hilt of her bloody sword….
And she jumped; her
feet escaped gravity; her hair transformed into a tangled disarray, and her
throat contracted into a shriek of rage which rose shrilly from her lips. She
fell through the air, her sword falling over her head and lowering gradually,
aimed right by the dagger that was her friend’s last strike. Cally descended
rapidly, bringing her sword down at last, when suddenly her stomach contracted,
and her breathing was cut off abruptly. She looked down to see the dragon’s
tail coiled tightly around her waist, cutting off her air supply and tying her
sword to her side. Some of the red in her vision faded, writhing and pulsing
until it gently cleared from her view, pulling out some of her rage. She
blinked and looked down. “I can’t move,” Cally observed, her voice small and
strangled. The dragon’s raging amber eyes just stared, as if to say: Obviously.
“ No! No, you don’t, you don’t understand!” Cally kicked at the dragon’s
tail, aiming at the cut she had made earlier from which the trickle of blood
had slowed. The tail remained in place, barring her from movement and
disrupting her breathing. She gasped, sucking at the air like a fish out of
water, then turned to the dragon’s face again, her slightly tanned skin brushed
with sudden heat from the dragon’s exhales, which released gentle plumes of
smoke into the already smoke-filled air. She tried again. “ I have to move,
because you just killed my friend and I have to avenge her death. “She stared
up at him, seriously. “I’m going to have to kill you now.”
The dragon seemed
amused, a hint of fangs revealing a sliver of what could have been a smile had
the dragon not suddenly released her and turned its face. It slowly started to
stumble away, its powerful legs riddled with bruises and cuts, its tail
dragging behind it on the cave floor. It drifted sullenly, a great beast with
too many wounds to march proudly. The dragon ventured with caution, its
footfalls gentle as it stepped with observance to its many wounds; as it loped,
it moved away from her.
Cally wasn’t a fan of
falling through the air; she hit the ground at an odd angle, her arms
flattening under her to take the brunt of the impact. The introduction of her
body to the cave floor was not a smooth one; she felt the vibrations from her
fall in her every limb and aching muscle, and her right arm, which happened to
be her sword arm, was screaming in explicit agony and leaking rivers of blood,
which stained the air with a metallic scent. She snapped back her hand, which
seemed to click into its place as her fractured wrist was righted and a fresh
current of pain swept over her and held her under its waves. Cally called out
through the veil of her intense torment: “I have to fight you! You killed her!”
She ran after the dragon. “You killed her!!!!!”
“Of course I did,” the
dragon replied with a deep, masculine voice that sent vibrations pulsing
through the cave. Dragons could talk? This was new to her and unheard of
in their kingdom. He continued with, “She
was trying to kill me.”
“I’m trying to
kill you too,” Cally reminded, stomping one foot in what was admittedly a
childish way, becoming desperate. “You have to fight me, so I can kill you!”
The dragon glared down
at her. “You couldn’t kill me. You mind is not sharp enough to think logically,
nor can you wield that sword of yours with anything that resembles skill, even
more so now that your wrist is dripping blood everywhere.”
Cally fumed, thoroughly
vexed. She would have thrown her hands up in frustration, except that would
inexorably generate a vibrant fountain of blood and destroy any evidence to
defend her questioned intelligence. She gritted her teeth and repeated her
case: “ You have to fight me, don’t you understand? I can’t leave knowing you
killed my friend and are still alive despite that! I have to finish the cause she set out to
fulfill! I have to kill you, because I’m a Perditha and we live so dragons can
die!” she gasped, out of breath, dropping to her knees as the dragon turned
away again.
“As I said, she was
trying to kill me first.” His voice was a low rumble, so quiet it would have
been inaudible had it not been almost completely silent in the cave. “I do not
wish to kill another human; I have no desire to fight any longer.” Its next
words were fragile, tentative- offered like a gift. “I’m sorry about your
friend.” Cally leapt to her feet and was
about to verbally mutilate and castigate the dragon when she glimpsed its
thoughtful face, turned slightly towards her; its orange-gold gaze was filled
with remorse. This conversation no longer seemed directed towards her, but it
seemed that the dragon was deeply pondering and voicing a deep sorrow of his
soul. “I’m sorry about all of them, really.”
He finally turned to
her, his shimmery opaque scales red and gold under the gentle light of the
fire. His scales were a pattern of ruby, amber, and gold hues, perfectly fit
together like a marvelous masterpiece or a puzzle made of precious jewels. His
voice was distant and wounded when he said, “I never forget them. Their faces,
their deaths.” He sighed morosely, a
deep forlorn expression crossing his face. “I will never forget the humans.” The dragon lay down in front of her, his
massive frame stumbling gradually, abruptly, and painfully into the ground. The
dragon’s head jerked; a ribbon of smoke seeped into the air as the dragon
released a soft moan. He shifted every time he placed pressure on an injury,
finally settling so that the dagger that was still impaled into his scales
stuck out like a flag over a castle. The dragon’s gaze was serious and doleful
as it met hers, and his gravelly voice echoed as he said softly, “If I kill
you, you will just be another human to haunt me.”
Cally’s mouth opened. A
gasp of revelation sang through her like a chord. Slowly, tentatively, Cally
unfurled the fingers of her good hand, which had been held in a tight fist.
Gradually, she raised her hand so it was level to her heart, and gently, like
the uncurling of a moth’s wings for the the first time, she splayed her fingers
out and extended her palm until she could feel the pulsing heat of the smoke
from the dragon’s nostrils, and the warm surface of the dragon’s face. “It’s ok,” she
said, watching his amber gaze disappear briefly as he closed his eyes in
relief, “I understand.” Suddenly she understood; behind this fearsome wall of
muscle was a pulsing heart, undoubtedly much bigger than her own. This dragon
just wanted a quiet life, away from the constant danger of weapons and
hate-filled people. He didn’t want a war. He didn’t want to be feared. He didn’t
want power.
He just wanted to be
left alone.
This dragon clearly had
never wanted attention, but he had been forced to slaughter those like her
friend who often put duty over their conscience when it came to dragons, whose
machinating nature had been taught to them since their births. Suddenly it made
sense. She understood.
And she forgave.
A rapid crescendo of
rustling signaled her to the dragon’s motion, her eyes flitting up to notice
his head was now far above her, and his magnificent wings cut cleanly through
the air like thick, red-and-orange tapestries, woven above with golden
highlights and covered completely with gleaming gold scales on the side that
spanned above her.
“You must be far from
home,” the dragon mused, contemplatively. “Surely I can assist you.”
Cally took a step back,
hesitating. Then she looked up, grinned, and nodded. “Yes, please,” she
whispered, almost too excited to believe what was happening. Anticipation
whirred through her veins, increasing the rate of her breathing and sending her
mind into a frenzy of Really? Flying? Is this a dream? She backpedaled,
the smile on her face blooming into a radiant grin as she ran forward and her
feet pushed off the ground to escape the pull of gravity, sending her plowing
through the atmosphere with her silver tangles combed by air and waving and
curling like metallic ribbons, her cerulean blue eyes alight with utter
euphoria as she spread her legs and crashed onto the dragon’s back, too
thrilled to acknowledge another failed landing or the pain that shot through
her wrist.
Her fingers stole out
and gripped Ivy’s dagger; she pulled it out from the dragon’s back and cradled
it between her hands, then gently wiped the dried blood and dirt off of it.
Cally faced the scratched blade and eyed her own grimy, briefly sorrowful
expression, then forced herself to release a grim smile. She held the dagger to
her heart, muttered a final “Good bye” and let the delicate silver weapon fall
gently, crashing against the ground. She watched. Steel against stone. A spark.
A metallic shriek. Then silence. Cally turned away and nodded resolutely.
The dragon took off,
nearly throwing her off as he pierced the sky and spread his wings like a
canopy of flames and light, the ground fanning out below like a gentle stream
of leaves and fluttering birds, which chirped to invite the dawn. The clouds
beside her were pink and fluffy, though when she reached out to trail her hands
through them, her fingers came out slathered in water and the texture was the
same as the air, giving it no flocculent feeling. An ache of hurt stabbed her
heart as she peered back at the shrinking cave, knowing that it held her
abandoned sword, and, more importantly, Ivy’s ashes, but the pain ebbed as she
knew that her friend would have wanted her to be safe, and the dragon himself
was also a victim of this broken world.
The sky spanned out in
front of her and took her breath away, the sun a warm glow that dominated her
view and was surrounded by a few thin clouds that were pushed along by the
wind, which waved as they passed along with their cheerful pink-and-purple
curves. The wind danced through the air, tossing up strands of her hair and
brushing a chill over her skin, failing to blow the beaming grin from her face.
The dragon paused, wingbeats a gentle thrum that churned to the rhythm of Cally’s
heartbeat, filling her with a warm hope as she gazed at the sunrise.
Warmth from the sun
bathed her face in golden light; Cally closed her eyes and felt the water that
clung to her arms as clouds clumsily meandered through her, painting her skin
with water droplets. Wind skipped past the birds and clouds, dancing over her
wet arms and dousing her in cold; Cally shuddered and wrapped her arms around
the dragon’s neck, receiving the pulsing waves of heat that the dragon emanated
from under its thick, metallic scales.
The hatred that had
filled her heart now dulled to an unusual, calming peace; somehow she felt much
lighter, much happier than she had felt when holding on to bitterness and blind
rage. The dragon exhaled gently, plumes of smoke curling and vanishing into the
air as his throat almost imperceptibly vibrated beneath her fingers. She
laughed, now in disbelief that she could ever want to kill such a beautiful,
unique creature. Cally looked up and felt the dragon’s head follow, and they
both gazed at the fiery-colored sunset and felt a new unity that crushed a
long-held wall of prejudice and hostility.
The sun beamed.
The wind whistled.
The trees swayed.
In the still morning
sky, both dragon and girl smiled together.
-Joanna Andrews
A line that I thought was good was" dragons allowed humans the gift of flight, their powerful wings imbued with potential to go places beyond a human’s imagination." I thought it did a good job at describing what the dragons could do for people. And it showed good description as well. Like when it said "their powerful wings imbued with potential" it showed how the wings were powerful and had a lot of potential for things.
ReplyDeleteI love this piece Joanna! One central idea I found was unity, with the line, "Suddenly she understood; behind this fearsome wall of muscle was a pulsing heart, undoubtedly much bigger than her own." A message that I saw was to understand that fighting amongst ourselves and hating each other will only bring misery, and that we should instead be forgiving and peaceful. A line to support this is, "The hatred that had filled her heart now dulled to an unusual, calming peace; somehow she felt much lighter, much happier than she had felt when holding on to bitterness and blind rage." Beautiful job!
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ReplyDeleteWow, Joanna! Your use of sensory language was really powerful, and especially helpful to this piece. Since dragons are fictional and portrayed differently in every story, sensory language really depicts the dragon’s physical image for the reader to visualize. While reading, I had a clear image of the dragon in my mind. Some lines that stood out to me the most as extremely descriptive were “then came a flash of glinting fangs“ and “coils of thick muscle...contorting and contracting and unwinding into a shape that grew closer and dangerously nearer.“
ReplyDeleteNice job! I liked this metaphor, “The rest of the world spanned out below her, treetops bobbing in various heights along the ground, forming a dark, uneven carpet that covered the entire expanse of forest." It really helped bring the story to life, and helped me imagine the scale of her height. I really liked the description of the sword, it told me a lot about her character as well. “Her weapon, a large gleaming sword with a designed bronze hilt, slashed and dismembered with the same graceless force that she herself employed in battle.” Really nice story!
ReplyDeleteJoanna, you do a nice job using figurative language, "Cally gritted her teeth, elbows scrunching in an accordion-like motion to propel herself upwards another centimeter on the jagged cliff face." Which really helps the readers understand the tenseness. " Yet she persevered, loping up the cliff face in clumsy, aching strides, her arms feeling as if they were being stabbed repeatedly with Ivy’s sharp daggers." This line also shows a great use of figurative language. It really helped bring the feeling's of the character alive, by equating what the pain felt like.
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